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FINA-FREAKIN-LY!!!!!!

Thank you very much for your explanation and review. You're a very kind author. You totally have all my respect. <3

as always it is day starter to get an update from you. to tell you the truth i am so inthused about your story because it is a yakuza story that gets more complex but not to hard to understand and yet it is very easy to follow. to tell another truth i have only ever liked one thing with the yakuza and that is the target in the finder series by ayano yamane. so thanks foe expanding my horizions. you know how easy it is to get stuck in the groove and act like old peoples (attitude not age) .i sopmetimes think the meter is stuck at dah why did i forget all about neiji in my excitement about itachi. now i see that ino is in the same boat as him and i am just waiting for one or both of them to turn on sauke and naruto. why is that oochimaru so tacky anywway. you tag naruto's assests (booty) when he's young and you call that him being used to you (smexy sick fuck). one day i plan to seek medial help for this emotional problem of mine. what about itachi's possible relationship with oochimaru i am guessing that with oochimary saying that naruto is his type that even if you show him and itachi together it will most likely be a sleeping together thing instead of it having some meaning to it. there is always the possibility that after sleeping together oochimaru will have feelings for itachi (hope springs eternal) unless you use this as the perfect opportunity to make itachi want to get rid of naruto so that he can be with oochimaru. why didn't itachi mention that momo had gaara as naruto's bodyguard. isn't he supposed to be informing but i would think that this is some important information about who is around naruto and should be included especially if it someone in the family. will you be mentioning through memories or flashbacks about how sasuke reacts to gaara and how naruto answered his questions about him. i am just curious about what lies naruto is telling him and how they will effect them and their relationship in the future. you have certainly been earning the chocolate today and because i came home and there was an update put some powered sugar on top. thanks and can't wait for the next update.

you written a story that i find so addictive that now i must not only send you cyber muffins but the ultimate super sized cyberwhite chocolate city block (since sugar and reviews give you energy i hope this powers you up for at least a week). actually i think the line that made me realize that gaara and itachi knew each other wasn't spoken. it was when gaara tightened his hand on his sword. since itachi remembers naruto as an annoying kid it was mad appropriate for him to act the way he did and i think that he should continue (not that my prefernces are not showing). i just think it will be more in keeping the characterizations that is being established in the story. now i could see him kissing oochimaru's ass (hopefully possibly more). if this inspires you to have a little oochimaru/itachi loving by all means go for what you know. you know sick chicks and the bad men they love. i am surprised that you did not have kabuto as his right hand as he is usually (nice). since i know that he is not connected to the oochimaru in an important professional way will he possibly show as oochimaru's lover (i am not opposed to that idea either). and now that sasuke has shown his hatred for the family i have raised the odds against it being naruto who tells him about his involvement. i need a little more time to figure out if it will be friend or foe it all depends on what is going to be happening in the next couple of chapters (unless he finds out in the next couple of chapters). will sasuke comment on gaara and the fact that he was bringing naruto home or was he to focused on naruto and itachi to notice. the same goes for naruto did he even notice that itachi told gaara to say hell to momo for him or was he to far away to hear what itachi said to gaara. may the god (i only think in sexy men) of writers ring blessings and sparkly stuff on your head.

Did you put two chapters up today, or are you just editing to keep it at the top of the list? I've seen it at the top of the list for two days straight, and it really bothers me. Please don't edit your story to keep it on the first page. Obviously, you're good enough that people look for your updates without you having to keep it on the first page and knock other stories down.

Please keep in mind that you're not the only author in this section looking for exposure.

you are a sadist and i bow at your feet. how could you leave with itachi just showing up. i swear when that happened i heard the avenger music. you know that little cowboy like music that they play whenever sasuke or itachi shows upin naruto. i know also tht this may seem like a dumb question but i have to ask. why did gaara not tell naruto about the fact that they meet each other in the orphanage. since he told him about all the other details himself even about being an asassin (that does not look spelled right) so why leave that out. also does gaara have any previous meetings with itachi because i think that would effect things as well. what about when naruto ccomes home with gaara in tow he is going to have to tell sasuke at least about the "family" now because he has a bodyguard. will it be itachi who spells the beans before naruto has a chance because he is part of the gang wouldn't he know who naruto is. how will itachi act towards naruto will he act like a kiss up or will he be his regular smexy cool bastardly self. since chapter 24 seems to be the place i want to be i will try and bribe you for an update with the blazinest cyber muffins (better than the cookies) for an update. thanks

you made my head buzz with this chapter you bombin author you. even though it may not seem like it this chapter was very informative to me. like for instance i now know that sasuke did not have good experiences (like loving sibling kind of thing) with itachi. itacho works for oochimaru (why didn't oochimaru hit on him). sasuke is now to me to be considered part of the "family" because of his brother and knows more about the yakuza (spelling) then it first appeared (yeah for surprises out of no where). although because of this i wonder if sasuke will have an "avenger" complex. i question this because sasuke mentions how much he despises his brother but not that he wants to kill him. does saske want to get revenge on oochimaru for the death of his parents. i can't imagine sasuke taking the name of naruto's uncle to well. was the orphange that gaara mentioned run by the family to support the kids of their fallen comrades or did it just happen to be the orphange that was in the area. if itachi works for the group even though naruto is just starting to become involved how come he doesn't know that itachi works for oochimaru. thanks for the update and hopefully to see the next one soon (you spoil me so).

omg thats so cute x3

Would you mind too terribly much fixing the typo in your story title? ☺

i glad you had a nice time i was at otakon and for three days the same thing happened to me. dumb dana otakon by the way is one of the big anime conventions in the states (by the way i bought a cute oochimaru plushie but i wish i could dres him likw the godfather thanks alot for that). since itachi is in the next chapter i have to know does he know about sasuke and naruto being together. did he know about sasuke's feelings for naruto before he left. did he approve or disapprove and tha is another reason that they moved to canada. i didn't even realize that naruto was still cutting himself but when i saw that i thought it was a good and realistic idea. i mean does anyone really believe that as soon as he has someone he is going to stop doing something that he has been doing for years in a matter of weeks or even months. can't wait to se the next update.