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for A bond thicker than blood

by Snoopythebrave

schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like this story it seems like you have a good idea where you are going. i think i like the direction it is taking but i have a question . are you going to delve more into what happened to sasuke that naruto feels guilty for. or is naruto just feeling bad because he did not see sasuke off. does naruto not going to see sasuke off have anything to do with oochamaru. i can't wait for the next chap. thanks and can't wait til the next update.
person roro237
schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your story just keeps getting better and better:) I'm enjoying the warmth between Naruto and Sasuke as they become closer. I really can feel it as I read the story. Looking forward to the next chapter:)
schedule July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just couldn't help myself, had to read it all again^_^
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The best first date ever, the kiss at the end had my heart melting!!! This was just such a wonderful chapter^_^
I'd love to be your beta, I'm not sure how it works either but I guess you could email the story to me and I can read it and change the things that need to be changed and then email it back to you. There is link about being beta's so I'm going to see what that says. If it gives details on how to be a beta, I'll let you know again.
Still smiling from the chapter^_^
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok that link wasn't very helpful!! I forgot to give you my email address, it's:
elizabethlk@hotmail.com
Looking forward to being your Beta^_^
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I almost cried with Sasuke when Naruto was crying in his arm!! It was so sad at the beginning but I was happy things were getting better for Naruto!!
I'd offer to be your beta reader if you like. I don't know if you would mind, but will be happy to help if you want.
I'm already looking forward to the next chapter, I love the fact I can read one chaptere a day^_^
person Arcueido
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hiya (^_^), only up to chappie 5 but i must say that the plot is really intriguing.

Even if I haven't read the other chapters, I'm already guessing it'll get better...

However, I'm inclined to point out one error that should be fixed and that's the title's spelling.... I thought it was intentional at first but I discovered under Chapter 1 that the title is indeed "A bond thicker than blood". If you're wondering how that can be fixed, its easily done under edit details. Here's my email if you're looking for beta...

Hypergraphian@gmail.com

person roro237
schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have fallen in love with your story:) Ch.9 was so touching. I'll be here to the end:)
schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, that was just so cute there at the end!! I feel so sorry for Naruto for having had to go through all that but I'm glad Sasuke is there to make him feel better!! Things are going nicely between those two, I just hope Sasuke can presuade Naruto that he isn't dirty!! What happend to him was not his fault!! I love this story!!
Thankfully my laptop has never died on me like that while writting something important, mind you it has accidently deleted an email I was writting and that nearly drove me crazy so I know compared to that you must have felt pretty annoyed!!
It's a shame you don't have some days off work!! I'm ill at the moment so my days off came at a good time, I have the flue!! I think your going to enjoy your holiday a lot in a weeks time!! My holiday from work is in september, just before university starts!!
Well I can't wait till the next chapter, try not to work too hard^_^
schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was just so sweet!! They make such a cute picture sleeping on the hospital bed together!! It should be interesting seeing Sasuke sticking close to Naruto for a whole week!! They're so cute together^_^
I'm glad your in a writing mood, means more to read for me^_^
The noodles sound nice, I like cooking for myself, even if I say so not a bad cook myself! The only good thing about working is the money! I'm off work for two days, so I'm going to take complete advantage of my free time!! I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter^_^