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Luv NaruXSasu.. ^-^
And I LUV this Storyyy XD

Awesome fic!!! I really enjoyed the emotions that you put in there and the writing was absolutely beautiful! Heh, and the ending made me laugh. ^^

that was one of the cutest and perhaps best oneshots ive ever read i mostlikely will read it at least six more times its so heart warming,by the ending id say that was the end but i liked it none the less.give the beta props too

OMG I LOVED THIS. this is like the best oneshot i've ever read. i love it to death. i'll prolly read it over and over

There are absolutely so many things I want to comment about on this one-shot that I do not think it will fit. First of all this was an AMAZING one-shot. Right from the start it was so full of feeling. How the story formed was perfect...I definitely like how you portrayed Sasuke and Naruto's charaters not cliché as most of these highschool stories are prone to do. You made them express their feelings in a nicely done way. And I'm not only talking about the smut ;P Which was done VERY nicely by the way. But I'm talking about their conversation at the beginning. I could actually picture how their past was like and how they depended on their rivalry. It was MARVELOUS! Also that brings me to the well writtin descriptions. I have to give you major thanks...your descriptions allowed me to picture the highschool scene PERFECTLY. Your lemon, strangely enough though it wasn't long because I prefer longer lemons, was definitely right for this story. It was innocent in a way and portrayed as not being perfect which really appealed to me. Their laughter was a key element and I liked it! I have not read very many stories like this one, definitely not. I admire your creativity and your writing skills. PLease, please write more stories wether it be one-shots or full out stories! I'm begging you:) This one-shot blew me away!

YOU POSTED IT!!! I was getting worried that you had decided not to post it here but I'm glad you did because it was amazing! And the Summary was great too! I read it several more times too and its still fantastic! You do promise to write more and post it right? (emphasis on the posting mind you!). Anyway I just wanted to drop in and say that the fic is still fantastic and I can't wait to read whatever else you have in store for us! My best wishes for you and your writing!

oh my gosh! what a great dynamic! =^^= I love it!

Very nice, sweet and excellently descriptive. I love the little speech Sasuke gave too. Very well done. ^_^