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person Vivi & Venny
schedule January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Vivi: Ah, not a much mindless sex~! I can see a little plot coming through!

Venny: Tch, Sai. "If I wasn't his cousin....Mhm." Fuck that. If I were Sasuke, and Itachi's cousins I would try, and get in their pants EVERY chance I got.

Vivi:....Same here, same here.

Venny: Sai doesn't have anyone yet?! Zee_Kay, you know I love you right, babe? I'll love you even more if you put in me in here, and put me with Sai.

Vivi:Stop begging.

Venny: Come on, at least let me dry hump his leg or something.

Vivi: O.o Okay, your starting to freak me out a little. Oh! The review. I wanna see the rest of the ItaXKyuu! Oh, and is this story going to continue with them in school, or is it going to end before that?

Venny:...I have gotten any in a month.

Vivi: Okay, I'm ending this right now.

Venny: Please sex the Venny!!

Vivi: Bye!

~Vivi & Venny
schedule December 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was hawt!!! Although I really did think/want Kyuu to top. He definitely is my favorite character here. And I hope all the i love you business does not stop any possible future foursomes. Also I was just thinking with the way their moms sounded so pleased about them getting together maybe they had a hand in all this, maybe it was planned.
person animelover
schedule December 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah baby! Now THAT'S what I'm talkin' about .. the stuff that makes you famous! Glad to see your back in action. This chap was fun to read; I could just picture Kyuu driving Itachi crazy by being seductive. And since they've kissed and made up, it's time for SasuNaru to kiss and make up .. right? pweeeeease? Oh, and when are Kyuu and Itachi going to spill the beans about what their moms are up to? Hmmm, smells like a sort of revenge thing?

Can't wait to see what happens next ... later!
person bbmmm
schedule December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HAku would be good for Sai. I loved the story. It's fabulous.
schedule December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy hot, Batman... as always. I love, love, love Kyuubi and Itachi. And I need Sasuke and Naruto to get back together... need it! Understand. They make me drool in a really, really good way. In fact, when I'm done here I'm going to go back and read all the drool worthy moments because I just that kind of crazy girl!
person qwerty
schedule December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Heh, I'm glad that my review made you laugh. Great chapter. *shakes head* Sai is so messed up. But then again, that's Sai for you.
update
person Jess
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon, i loved this chapter and all the others!!
person Jess
schedule November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sai does seem to be a sasuke clone doesn't he? Yay i liked the new chapter ^_^
person animelover
schedule November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG, this is soooo HAWWWWWWT!! I think my computer just blew a fuse. I think you've answered the question just how many lemons can you squeeze into one chapter. Mercy, I had to have my heart re-started at least a dozen times. Ok, I don't know when you posted the Tension and whatever title of the chapt after that, but PUHLLEEEEEASE update soon. I'm dying to know how Sai fits into all this. Oooh, maybe he'll drive the guys to commit to one another, hmmmmm?

YOU ROCK!! Hurry back!