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for Finishing the Portrait

by inediblefrogs

schedule July 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG I am giggling like a madwoman as I read this!
person tukixoxo
schedule April 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was HOT!!!!!!
schedule March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm baaaack! You have great stories! Your wry humor has me laughing out loud with a truely wicked grin on my face! Oooooohhh a homicidal scary Raidou is soooooo hot!
schedule February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh...Raidou is scary, I like it!!! It makes him all the more HOT! Good story... oh, and I love the way all your stories can stand alone or be worked into a complete time line! Thanks for a great story!
schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
My heart is beating 100 miles an hour.
That was so erotic and beautiful.
I don't remember reading such wonderful love scene in a very long time.
The whole story was great but that last chapter just blew me totally away!
person Hestia
schedule November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Now how am I supposed to write Raidou for D/s Naruto after reading this??? Holy shit, Raidou is teh man, king of the doms!
schedule September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fucking hot
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was an AMAZING story! You write Sasuke x Sai sooooo deliciously sensual. I f***ing love it! They are hot together, and I never realized it until I read your work. Oh, the sexual tension between Genma and Sasuke...wow! Also, I was laughing my ass off regarding Kakashi and Gai's little contest. How original! OMG then Kakashi watching with his Sharingan...that was voyeurism at its finest! Also, the way you wove Kotetsu into the whole scenario, was funny as well as super freakin' HOT! You're AWESOME!
schedule July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really liked the hotness, but Kotetsu was practically a one-man show! You must be a Kotetsu fan 'cuz he had some the funniest lines!

Cookie~
person Anon
schedule July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you needa write more damn that is fu**en hottttttttt!!!!! as holy monkey hell