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Nice job. Very sexy. I look forward to more from you.

Oh oh oh! That was just perfect. There was just enough plot to make all that steamy sexyness plausable. And oh, man, was that smex steamy! I'm absolutely THRILLED that you're going to be writing a chapter for JDK!

Soooooo HOT~! Thanks! whew...

Really enjoyed your story and I'm looking forward to your next.

HELLS YES.

I am so insanely pleased that you finished this. You win, so hard, no shit. Hot, hot threesome... Raidou's controlling nature (in the bedroom, anyway) came across really well here, and made it sooooo freaking hot.

...My mind will be reviewing the image of Sasuke riding *just the head* for quite some time. I've go to say, my favorite Sasuke is cock-riding-Sasuke. And oh, ha ha, Kakashi's so selfish, not letting Sasuke get off...

I love how you tied in Raidou's thoughts about Sasuke, his slight... grudge, maybe? against him for the actions that led to Genma being injured, and the bit of forgiveness that happened later.

This was a great story, drooling-level sexiness, and cute and funny as well, even if it is total crack - it fills me with joy. Genma and Sasuke? What a game plan, indeed. ^_^

KEEP WRITING PLZ.

i was so looking forward to this chapter))) even though i kind of expected there would be no swearing kotetsu in it XD))) now i'm beginning to like raidou - who wouldn't like a bf, who gives you a fucking session with kakashi and sasuke as an anniversary present?...XD))) *drools to death*...
i loved how you put the d/s philosophy into this chapter, and all the orders raidou was coming up with were just 100C hot XD))) to tally loved it ;)))

hmmm that was no mysterious "Anon", but non other than your perverted fan from y-gallery which is me)))
aaand to some more constructive comments - boy, i loved that submissive and hungry sasuke you pictured)))
i didn't quite get why his secret meeting with kakashi didn't result in his release - was he too frustrated after seeing kakashi lose to gai in thatcome-shooting competition? XD))) yeah, how can a great uchiha mess up with a loser - even the idea seems unbearable XD))))

omg yeah!

Sasukes reaction towards kakashi watching him is so.. fucking.. hot! ust ftw. lol
What s surprise that it has all been well planned by raidou. sneaky, sneaky. XD

I'm SO MUCH looking forward to genmas reward. ;> yay!

*growls* You big meanie! Stopping at that point. I hope you plan to continue ASAP!!! ^_^

Oh man, I did not see that coming. Congratulations, you surprised me thoroughly. Are we going to see Genma getting some???