rate_review Reviews

XD Yay! I love how this story is funny and sexy at the same time. It was great how Sai thought of Kotetsu as his great new friend. 'that nice Kotetsu...' hee hee! ^_^ And Sasuke the exhibitionist was so hot... I really liked his silent interaction with Kakashi, and Kotetsu's commentary made it even better. Guh... "shiny spot." I think you've ignited a new yaoi-interest in me for Sai/Sasuke.

Anyway - loved how you ended the chapter. Makes me wonder if Sai will be perched outside the window, sketchbook in hand. ^_^

Holy hell but Raidoh scares me. Sai on the other hand is just too funny in this. I'm just dying to see Raidoh, Genma, and Sasuke together.

you should definitely upload it to yaoi.y-gallery! this is great...i was giggling like mad the whole time reading it...and sai's phrase "Perfect! You both have huge penises, red faces, and sweaty hair. Let's start." - that got me rolling over the floor with laughter XD)))
ok, maybe the whole situation does not look quite natural...but who actually gives a damn what looks natural in the smutty fanfiction world (like the whole konoha male shinobi population being gay looks natural...yeah, right XD))), but this was just great...in spite of the absirdity and crankyness of the situation, kotetsu giving sai blowjob instructions was HOT!)))
i'm really excited to find out how it will all develop given the sudden appearance of kakashi and gai)))
*prays dirty prayers for your smutty muse*)))

i cracked up. XD Your penis is too small... LOL

Omg.. i hope Kakashi and Gai notice them. XD ehehehe..

*gasp* Bonus SaixSasuke! Whoa... It's really funny that Sasuke thought about how much Sai looked like him... and *then* he started thinking Sai was attractive. The little ego-centric bastard - gotta love him.

Kotetsu is really cracking me up. This line: "Who, me? I'm all Sasuke, all the time. The guy's a riddle, wrapped in an enigma, wrapped in clown pants, pirate shirt and a rope belt. I'd fuck him." I rolled.

This is so great... and now Genma and Sasuke are in quite an interesting predicament. I can't imagine it'll be very easy for them to hold still... heh heh heh.

But - oh noes! - Gai and Kakashi loom on the horizon! ^_^ Looking forward to next chapter.

*pumps fist in air* Yes!!!!! I love it. I love the chuunin and jounin, love Genma sooo much... and you're making my crack dream come true.

Hee hee... so funny how Anko just happened to start sleeping in the nude. ^_^ She's awesome. And I can just picture Sai tagging along with Jiraiya on his 'research trips'. Hrhrhr. Great flashback of the chuunin finals.

And... you said this was a WIP, right? *drools* This chapter was teh AWESOME. Can't wait.

hah, cool. ^^ You wrote this based on my senseis artwork. Her art wins! lol

Funny thing, genma never noticed sai spying on him. What a dilemma. XD Raidou's so oblivious.. i hope genma's able to talk Sasuke into it. ehehe.. and they won't be disturbed..

I really like the idea of sais "erotic art" sketchbook.

That was really original. I really have grown a liking to Sai in the manga like no other character. He's such an interesting creature, and I just love the way he picks on Naruto. It was a great piece! ^_^

Thank you for the review, btw. I sincerely appreciate it.