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by Lechan

person Ultra
schedule March 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really do hope you add more to this. It was wonderful.

And since I can't Review Kyuubi The Bitch for whatever reason, i'll just do it here, now:

Please update that story soon. I'm going insane with waiting. IT IS SO WELL WRITTEN AND SO AWESOME.
person Anon
schedule January 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really hope you continue this. This ending makes my heart feel like its trapped in a vice.
schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Cool story... true guess it would be easy to keep him alive afterwards but that was change this fic from the semi-dark fic that it started out into something else... If you can manage it then go ahead but from my point of view it's going to be really hard to keep the flow and mood of the story going (and the style you wrote it in)


Great job with the style, the transitions and the details of this story.
person AnsemMesna
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I want to copy of the song.
person AnsemMesna
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh I forgot, my e-mail is orochi_greel@live.com
person comatoze
schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is only rated ++++?!? This is honestly one of the best one-shots I have EVER read. You had me crying it was so well written. Dear lord pease keep up the good work, haha.

I liked it as a one shot, and it should probably stay that way, but honestly, if you found a way to continue this, I'm all for it.

Wow.
person Skaye
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cool fic. It was very nice I hope you contuine it maybe put Sasuke point of view?
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schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
damn good! you had me crying half way through!

very good story (even though it was only based on the first 4 min or so).
Awesome! loved it entirely!
schedule July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was really good, it made me cry. I've thought a few times that if it was me at that moment I'd have been hard pressed not to just let him stab me. If I were you I'd leave it as a oneshot, it makes more of an impact this way. Good job.
person emp78
schedule July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was so good! Leave it as a one-shot; it would ruin the story if made longer, in my opinion. The way it is now brings out the feelings involved between the two.