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March 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, chapter three seems really interesting, you should break that off into a story of it's own.
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March 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2, sorry
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February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow, that was really hot! I love especially the chapter 1 and 5! please continue! :D
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December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you really should brach off of chapter 2 into a fic by itself
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December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope you make a story out of chapter two of this its a interesting idea espically if those three became a team
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August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
These are really nice! Chapter 1 is a really nice twist, and it actually gets better. I like how in chapter 2, Hinata is targeting not just Naruto, but Sakura as well: it'd make a really strange but interesting relationship, especially in the way she offers herself to them and offers to help them with any dreams they have. And I really like the subtlety of chapter 3! If it weren't for the title, you'd just about miss the intended pairing. The way Hanabi put it ("guys pick on the girls they like") is rather funny and implies that Neji might be in denial, while Hinata might not be aware. XD Hiashi's musings were interesting as well, especially since he Seemed insightful enough, until he was clueless at the end. XD
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July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NOW THIS SOUNDED INTERESTING, SIMILAR TO ORANGES BUT IT SEEMS NEJI ISN'T THAT WILLING. BUT STILL INTERESTING HOPE YOU UPDATE STRABERRY SOON I REALLY WANT TO KNOW WHERE THAT ONE IS GOING.