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for A Life for a Life

by AlysiaStorms

person Smexykitsune
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Um, I've read this over on MM.org. In fact, I have it bookmarked. You are much further along on that site. Are you going to continue updating there or just here from now on? I like how you gave a twist on brining back the fourth. Keep up the good work.
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh man, oh man, oh man, oh man, oh man! I can't wait until he and Naruto meet. =^^=

You're doing a great job on this story. Although, you do have the ages wrong. Naruto should only be 15/16 if the story is taking place 3 years after the Chuunin exams. ;)

Keep up the good work!
person Kilrath
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this story a lot and i hope you see fit to continue it. The story is well written and i look forward to seeing more from you.