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July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Iruka so deserves this man. Itachi is such scum.
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July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story. ^.^ Thanks to you I've gotten back into reading Naruto fanfictions. Loved the last chapter the best though. It was so cute and smexy!
On a completely different note I hate you for updating so quickly. XD No I don't really hate you. I just wish I could update as quickly as you do. How do you do it?!
On a completely different note I hate you for updating so quickly. XD No I don't really hate you. I just wish I could update as quickly as you do. How do you do it?!
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July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's so nice to see Iruka happy again and those two are just so sweet and fluffy together-of course the smut is really hot too! ;)
I know I haven't reviewed in a couple of chapters (sorry) but they all would have said the same thing, something along the lines of what a wonderful story this is and how much I'm enjoying reading it! I also thought you did a really great job of developing the relationship between Iruka and Kakashi :)
I know I haven't reviewed in a couple of chapters (sorry) but they all would have said the same thing, something along the lines of what a wonderful story this is and how much I'm enjoying reading it! I also thought you did a really great job of developing the relationship between Iruka and Kakashi :)
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July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. The smut? Jesus... Incredibly good. I really enjoyed seeing more of Kakashi in this chapter as he should be and as he seems to me in the manga. There isn't anything that divides him really from say Naruto or Sasuke, and that's becasue he chooses to be that open with them as a result of their relationships with each other. I see him keeping that same warmth and enthusiasm about him with Iruka, and you've done an excellent job with it.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
^_^
I can't wait for the next chapter!
^_^
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July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was very nice. Kakashi and Iruka are one of my favorite pairings (I think I've told you that already but oh well never hurts to repeat it).
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July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
God they're so awesome together. I'm jsut waiting for the letdown. Itachi has to show back up eventually. Wouldn't that be some shit if Iruka had known about Itachi's intentions to kill his clan before it happened? Yikes.
Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm preparing for angst!
Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm preparing for angst!
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July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like Iruka and Kakashi together (don't know if they will stay that way but I'll enjoy it while they are). Thanks.
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July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was an awesome chapter. You are eerily good at writing rape victims. It's really heart wrenching to watch everything that's happening to Iruka, but I love the fact that Kakashi isn't afraid to make Iruka face his fears and move on from it. I think it makes for a potentially incredible relationship between the two of them, emotionally and physically.
I'm still at a loss on how you write Kakashi. He seems so kind and compassionate, and yet, he's holding so much back from Iruka. He still hasn't given an explanation as to why he wants to help Iruka (even though we all KNOW why), and he hasn't shown any emotions to the Chuunin except his stoic kindness.
I really can't wait for you to develop Kakashi more. There's a doushinji out called Water. Have you heard of it? It's a KakaIru yaoi, and it's really beautiful. I think you should read it if you haven't seen it. You can always email me for more details.
Great chapter! ^^
BG
I'm still at a loss on how you write Kakashi. He seems so kind and compassionate, and yet, he's holding so much back from Iruka. He still hasn't given an explanation as to why he wants to help Iruka (even though we all KNOW why), and he hasn't shown any emotions to the Chuunin except his stoic kindness.
I really can't wait for you to develop Kakashi more. There's a doushinji out called Water. Have you heard of it? It's a KakaIru yaoi, and it's really beautiful. I think you should read it if you haven't seen it. You can always email me for more details.
Great chapter! ^^
BG
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July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Although I'm not disappointed with this... it's just... that it seems to be a bit too good for Iruka right now. Itachi is probably going to show up soon and things will fall apart, right? Especially for Iruka... or is it just my way of thinking something bad is going to happen, soon.
-Hello
-Hello
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July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Iruka. I wonder who else (and how many) Itachi has done this to.