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A harsh, but good chapter. I actually don't know how this chapter made me feel. I don't really mind the rape scene, it's just that I feel bad for Iruka and I'm not sure where Itachi is coming from. I figured he really liked Iruka, but then turns around and does something like this. It almost seems that he's only doing stuff w/Iruka to make Sasuke jealous/obediant; sex w/the cute sensei is just an added bonus. Hope the upcoming chapters shed some light on what is going on. I could assume that Itachi is going through his psychosis that led up to the events in the anime/manga, but I don't want to assume that is what you had in mind plot wise. So update soon please. :)

I wish Itachi would just murder his family and leave, seriously that was just too heartbreaking, although now i can't help but wonder what he's been doing to his brother. As much as I hate the Iruka abuse I just can't stop reading this, I'm always waiting for the next chapter :)

Wow, part 6... very emotional. I hope Iruka finds something more effective in keeping Itachi away. I wonder what Itachi did... can`t help but have multiple thoughts on what he could`ve done with Sasuke.

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Poor Iruka.

Looking forward to the next chapter so I can see what happens next. Thanks

Thanks for another chapter. Your story is getting more and more interesting and complicated. Thanks again.

Well, ok. I've been reading your story and I have yet to review. So far, I'm intensely enjoying it, not just because of the smut, but the character development is really excellent. I like how Itachi is gradually becoming more and more violent with Iruka, and I'm enjoying how Iruka compares his relationship with the bastard Uchiha to Kakashi's relationship with Yamato. (Which is a totally a hot, unusual pairing, btw.)

So far, I'm really enjoying it. It's nice to read a well written simple story... one that doesn't make my head hurt to read it.

Beautiful job so far, and I'll be sticking around. Drop me an email when you update! white_light_star@yahoo.com or brucesgirl@plansofexodus.com

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I thought something was up, but I thought that Sasuke had a crush on Iruka? I also thought that maybe Itachi was taking advantage of his brother, but it seems that Sasuke has some issues. Of course I loved the little scene w/Kakashi. Can't wait for the next chapter.

I'm enjoying your story and looking forward to the next chapter (I'd forgotten how quickly you update when writing). Also anxious to see where the story is going. Thanks for writing.

Wow, part 4. Nicely described. Itachi`s possessiveness has shown (stating the obvious). Ah, Iruka must feel bad since Sasuke`s already suspicious of him sleeping wiht his brother. So far, the story is great... and these are very quick updates. =)

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I usually don't read un-KakaIru fics, but this got me intergiued with this ship.
To be honest, I thought it would be really lame, 'cause this is a crackship, but you did this story so well I was SO surprised! Your writing is awesome, the sex scenes are great and the whole plot you made it so cool~!
Although I'm not sure how old is Itachi in the story, maybe I missed it?

I hope it won't turn too violent ; ; ~ or maybe that it will and Kakashi will save Iruka from Itachi XD;

Also, I feel that Naruto himself is very missing in the fic. I see Iruka as Naruto's only father/mother-like parent figure and when he claimed to have nothing to do in the week off, I was like "...Go eat Ramen with Naruto and stuff."

Other than that, I really enjoyed it~! ^___^ Hope you'll update soon~ <3