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for 'Til Death Do Us Part

by BishounenKrazed

person Rennasakura
schedule March 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It's really really sad! It take me all of my will to stop any tear from coming out (eyes still blurry though) Tis is a wonderful piece of art, It would certainly make me cry if only you would let us see what is Naruto reaction, or feeling, at least... but, I'm content with this :<>
person Carousel
schedule January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was the most beautiful, agonizing story I ever read. I never cried so much in my life. <3
person hsbs
schedule June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
boo hoo...you made me get big fat tears in my eyes!
schedule November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You have such a mean streak! You make me cry repeatedly. I have saved this story and the Goodbye story to my favorites.
person oohshiny
schedule October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
GRAHHHHHH MUST....READ....NEXT....CHAPTER..... also if your too lazy to look for my email in my other coments its deannathx@comcast.net email me when you updat it....
person blueh
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I almost cried!!! It's heartbreaking... *sniff*
person S_R
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
TT__TT So sad...I cried but I'm a total sap and cry easily. But your way of expressing Sasuke's feelings was completely awesome. I'm just wondering where Sasuke managed to get Poison o.o

Please continue, I'd love to read a continuation with Naruto's feelings. *puppy eyes* Pwease?
person person_a_rt
schedule August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Uwaaaah!! I'm crying that was great and angsty! I wish Naruto could at just a little bit like him as a lover not as a friend!!!!
person amberblood
schedule July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you made me cry! and then I had to read it again...and I cried again...this really tugs at your heart strings...and then rips them out and eats them...it was beautifully and heart wrenchingly written.
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was so unbelievably beautiful, and so unbelievably sad. I love happy things but that doesn't mean i can't appreciate the sad one. I didn't cry but my heart feels empty from it and I don't know about you but that can be worst then tears.