rate_review Reviews

Just wanted to let you know that I love your stories, and I think you are a fantastic writer. This one was sad, but I absolutely loved it. I'm such a sucker for angst. Anyway, keep up the great work. I'm looking forward to reading more from you.

wow. first of all, what a heart-wrenching, tear-jerking piece of fiction you have here. you did an amazing job with the way you wrote the characters. i love the fighting within themselves that they all endure. most particularly, and poignantly, sasuke's. he's so incredibly torn in this fic and it makes me cry. now, i'm like more people and angsting sasuke is a lot of fun. but dayum woman. this is incredible angst. you did a great job with this and you should be very proud of it.

now, let me tell you, for no particular reason other than the symbolism in it, the ending is my favorite part of this story. that sasuke's death, whom naruto had undoubtedly counted and cared unconditionally for, could be so effective is just a simple testament to how much they really meant to each other. without having to say the words, the rest of the world could clearly see how much in love these two really were. and as naruto's heart broke with the letter from sasuke, it was much more obvious to himself as well.

you've done fantastic work here, and i apologize if it seems rambling... <__< you know how i am...

much love!
~hanyou-elf

Shit, I've been crying since I read when Naruto said he was getting married. My neck and the collar of my shirt are soaked and my nose is all stuffed up. Usually I don't like to read death fics since I'm such a wuss, but your summary was too much to resist. It was beautifully written despite it being so damn sad, so much kudos with that. I've just stopped crying, so now I'm going to go clean up =/

.....You killd Sasuke..... i dont think i have ever cried so much for a fictional charecter. Loved it, you should make one more chapter. Make it in Narutos prov. Update soon!!.^-^

*sniff* Poor Sasuke. :(

Is that all there is? I hope this isn't a one shot.

omg you gotta continue this XD

Wow. Like... zomg wow. *wipes away tears* I was all proud of MY angst, and I'm suddenly humbled by the mass of talent that is you. You have an incredible way of just conveying the cold pain of loneliness. If I could pick any word to describe this story, in one, it would be painful.

It was an absolutely beautiful telling, and not to be stuck up or anything, I usually don't like AU's, but I guess as you can tell from other reviews I've left you in the past, I love your story. I'm really happy with this one, and I hope to see more of this caliber from you in the future.

Beautiful!

BG

This was really sad. I liked it a lot, but I felt as if the ending could have been better (sadder). I would have liked to have had Naruto find Sasuke, just because I think that the emotions would have been more intense. I felt that by having Sakura find him, it sort of disconnected me the really strong feelings that you had going... That's just my personal opinion though.
Still, I must admit that enjoyed reading it. Good Job, and keep up the awesome writing. ^^

i don't want to cry. but yeah, incredibly tearful worthy, tears at your heart. i'm still managing to keep any tears at bay. but just wow. hehe, i want to read something happy now between the 2 of them. other than that, it was incredibly well written. and i always appreciate fics more when they are written like that.. not that my reviews follow any kind of structure or grammar rules. ^_^

Damn. This has got to be the most depressing Naruto fic I've read to date. Thanks.