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omg so goood! Yes Neji and tenten are so cute together, I love it! Update soon!

soooo sweet! Go Neji!

Despite the lack of smex I enjoyed this chapter. Maybe I should say, I enjoyed this chapter with the lack of smexiness? I actually like how you're making Neji wait. It makes it feel more realistic, more IC for them both (I don't see Tenten as the type to bedhop) and honestly I enjoyed reading about the two of them just cuddling. I LOVED reading it from Neji's POV, especially - like the way he's all "YAY TENTEN'S BOOBS" but trying really hard just to be there for her. Tenten's right - he is sweet.

You've actually done quite a good job of constructing this dynamic between the team. Neji's adorable, especially in light of Lee - yet Lee isn't a bastard, nor unrealistically hateful, just a real guy with a real reaction. I was actually expecting Tenten to spill but the fact that she didn't just builds my anticipation for when Neji does find out.

In short, I love this story, I love your buildup to Nejiten, I love the originality of your approach, and I can't WAIT for the next chapter.

wow, amazing story! Personally I like LeeTen more than Nejiten, but in this story it's such a triangel and so mcuh tense that no one really knows whom Tenten is realy choosing and those problems are that, neji loves tenten, but she loves lee and lee is inlove with that sakura. maaan you better hurry up with the next chapter! :D

Oh PLEASE let there be! It doesn't have to be right away,but I always had the feeling Neji would make the better partner for Tenten in this fic. Maybe he comforts her?

Oh my god!
I love this story you have to update soon k!

A TenTen/Neiji lemon would certainly advance your theme of the mènage à trois forming with the thee of them, and it`d give lots of opportunities for misunderstandings and generally a bit of a soap opera. Should you chose not to insert a Neiji lemon then you will have to drop a story strand that has made the story so good so far, soI suppose there is more that speaks for the lemon otherwise the story should have started out as a straigt Lee/TenTen stor with a different approach. Though no matter what please Update soon

Ooooh. Nejiten lemon! Please! Please!

...I've kind of been anticipating it. Anxiously. ^^;; Hehehe. It's just - the Tenten crushing on Lee, Neji comforts her when rejection occurs angle was so NOVEL and I love reading stories where the usual dynamic is flipped. Neji chasing Tenten is one of my favorites.

Either way, you're a great writer and I'm looking forward to the next chapter - whether or not there is Nejiten lemon.

awww I'm glad to hear that. I'd like a neji/tenten lemon, not just bc it's a hot pairing, but it'd be cool for her to be with te one who loves her. lol

I love this story! There aren't enough out there about these characters. And I love the love triangle too. I want a Neji/tenten lemon! lol

Please continue your story!!