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well first of all it want to congratulate on the persons this fic focuses on, very unusual. Secondly you write your story well and the lemon scenewas written in a very romantic way. It is also interesting tosee how your charactersare revolving around never quite being able to catch up zo each other. Your story has loads of potential and the plot is coming about nicely making me want you to update as soon as possible

so so happy that you're still writing this fic. the newest chapter was so hot, but the ending was so sad for tenten. Anyway keep up the good work and good luck with your exams.

Please update soon! I love this story and I like angry Lee! But please dont let him be a bastard towards Tenten! A new chapter right away!

I don't know why I haven't said how much I enjoy this story. I'm a fan of Neji/Tenten but danged if the way you write this isn't making me curious about Lee/Tenten. I especially love reading how Neji and Lee begin to realize their fair teammate is different from them....Neji's realizations are especially fun. I assume the next lemon is going to be Lee/Tenten...will there be any NejiTenten action? Any jealous fights? Heck, threesomes?

I don't know if you have it or not, but Cartoon Network has been having this 'Naruto Hundo' thing going on, and even though I've seen all the episodes already, I loved watching my favorite parts. It reminded me of your story, and this just confirms that your story is a believable story if sticking to canon. Once again, well done. ^.^


As for the Harry Potter thing, it's no big deal...I actually went through the chapters, and realized you had a valid point when it came to similarities. I can't remember which chapter it was, but remember the one where Sakura had the map? I think I stole the little-dot-for-your-location-on-the-map thing. The other part, where the rest of the ink bled into view for her was my own idea. For whatever reason, I didn't intentionally do this. I laughed when I read it again, and while it fits, I did see the absolute similarities. Thanks for pointing it out. But when it comes down to it, I did it because it was convenient, not because it was from someone else's works. It just tells me that you're paying attention, and I like that. Currently working on chapter seven. While it's going to be funny and sweet, it will also be sad. I think it might be one of my longer chapters, so it'll take me a while since I have other obligations to fulfill as well.


Kiyasume

Ah. This....I could definitely see this happening in the cannon. It was written well, and I felt Ten-ten's pain at Lee preferring Sakura to herself, something I've had the unlucky fortune to feel myself. It's amazing how some people can write well, and then how some can write realistically. Good job.


As for a similarity between my stories and Harry Potter, could you explain that in a bit more detail? I'm afraid I came up a bit confused at that statement, and, as curious as I am, I wondered what you meant by that.


Kiyasume

How embarrasing for tenten to wake up like that, but at least lee is noticing her for the first time as a woman. Anyway I loved the last chapter. I read that you want what's wrong with the fic, but so far I've got nothing. I'll review with the first thing that's wrong when I see it. Promise(grin) Keep up the good work, and update soon.

Hey, a little blood can go a long, long, long way. Even if it weren't much, it can look real bad.
I can't figure out how to say I know about it without sounding like a grade A nutcase, i just know.
Keep up the effort, it's paying off.
CD

Love this fic!!! I really like fics about team gai. Love neji, and lee is so funny. Anyway about your fic please update soon and tell me how tenten is. I like the way you've set up the fic with tenten and the guys. Please write more I'm dying to know what happens.

Holy...shit! Keep writing!