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for Whispers in the Dark

by FarawayDawn

schedule May 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
... Yep, you're right. No amount of editing could possibly make that PG13 enough for fanfiction.net. lol. :) I read some of your stuff on ffnet and figured I'd follow you over here. Now that I know this place exists, I'm going to galivant around, sampling the wares newly avaliable! Ciao, darling!

Gawd, I feel so Sex and the City right now... XP
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person Anon
schedule July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(I review as I read.)

By the way, your username is really pretty. ♥

(*reading the first few lines AFTER the song*) This one’s going to be sad, isn’t it? . . . . Love how the reason slowly comes out. . . . (I gotta listen to this song sometime; it sounds kind of pretty.) . . . . (Then again, maybe it’s not my thing. *sweat*) . . . . I like this part, where Sasuke “still sensed his brother.” And “could almost smell the autumn leaves” and so on. . . . Aww, that’s sad: “He wanted his brother. Wanted the man he claimed to hate so deeply.” ó_ò That makes sense. . . . Ooh, that’s haunting: “I’ve never been far.” . . . . This is what I call sad erotica. It’s erotic, but kind of heartbreaking. I wonder if this is a dream or not, despite what Itachi’s saying. . . . Hmm, maybe it is a dream. Some of the stuff that’s happening is stuff I’m not sure could physically happen in real life (though in a fantasy, sure). Either way, it’s kind of sweet. . . . Oh! I was wrong! Shoulda guessed there was a clone involved! ^^; . . . . (*shiver*) Man, Itachi’s darkly hot. I can totally picture him with a “bedroom voice” full of dark promise.

I liked this one, too.
person blisblop
schedule March 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I wonder if I ever mentioned that this fic is a seriously kick ass piece of hotness? Consider it said.
person rage
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was really good, it kinda seems like your gonna add more onto it, but hey dats just my way of taking it. its a really great piece though.
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOVED IT! Man I've always craving Uchihacest and this was absolutely wonderful!
person ur sasUKE
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*squeeeeeeeeeeeee* OMG OMG OMG!!!! NII SAN!!!!!!!!!! *glomp* That was amazing. I can't wait to come visit you on Sunday ^^ A whole week together. I'm so excited...Oh, this probably sounds so wrong huh Nii San ^///^ Oh well~ But yes, I loved it!
person Kigen
schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
My god. You actually posted your Uchihacest. Your inner Itachi threatened to with hold Uchihacest, didn't he? Thank him for threatening you, would you.

Anyways, great fic. I loved it. We all know Itachi secretly wants to fuck- I mean, loves Sasuke. Good job for a oneshot... I want longer from you. Gimme more. Keep up the good work.