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for Blood Surrender

by brook13baby13

person hisoka
schedule September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
if you didnt know itachi youd think he was some crazy stalker the way he just appears and disappears,for some reason i thought iruka would work at an animal hospital not a blood bank though that is one of my dream jobs.coldasaks suck the stupid key hole shaped living areas i can say that cuz i live in one, and when your neighbors have a party people tend to loitor in your front yard all around your bushes while you glare at them through a window and they dont see or they do but their too drunk to care or understand whats going on/where the hell there are.hope you can update soon gotta know what itachis planning
person VRon8899
schedule September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
-blushes-..hehe...yeah...XDD thank you....i really like the direction of your story so keep writing!! ^^;
person SaSuNaRu
schedule September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ITACHI!!!! what the heck is he going to do??????????????
schedule September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nooooooo the poor baby -cries-

Great chapter. I feel sorry for Sasuke, he has such a bad family
person Anon
schedule September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Uh,oh. Not good. Please continue!!
person oohshiny
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
GIMME MORE NOW I TELL YOU WRITE WRITE LIKE THE WIND!!!! OR LIKE IF YOU DUN WRITE YOUR VERSION SASUKE WILL COME GET YOU FER HIS PARENTS!!!
person hisoka
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so,whats with sasukes brother and whyd he tell naruto?...he fainted...if he were someone else id call him a pansy but after the investigating and watching the mother bleed a dog he cant be cuz he didnt scream or cry from seeing that.hope you can update soon wondering what the parents are gonna say and why itachis angry
person Anon
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I'm surprised Sasuke told Naruto what happened. Hurry with the next chapter!!
person VRon8899
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Sasuke....he's between a hard place and a rock.....i can't wait to read more, please update soon!!
person Damp
schedule September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poopie! Irukaaaaaaaa!!!! Why'd you have to inturrupt the dream just when it was getting good???!!!

-Damp *That was so not fair! How could you do this to me!!!!*