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July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very well written. A few Gramma mistakes but the plot is good and your desciptions rock ^^ Naruto seems very observant I love that baout this story. A lot of other ones make him out to be stupid. Keep up the good work and update soon!
~Chishio
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July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, I love Sasuke you made my day twice already XD Thankiessss !! XD Naruto is so cute I almost died at those you smell nice, taste nice too thing ;p
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July 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is very well written, the characters arent OC at all. I love the way your writing everything form Naruto's point of view, it gives the story a very unique aspect. I cant wait for the next chapter, please keep writing!
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July 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love this story, i caught me at the first words, it was great, and poor sasuke
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July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is really good. I can't wait to read another chapter.
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July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awe! So Cute! Cuddling is awesome, and a younger innocent Naruto with an older more 'aware' Sasuke is pretty awesome =D I liked the entire chapter! lol that was pretty funny when Naruto got hit up-side his head for breaking and entering xD Poor Kiddo! But i love cuddling so all the sweetness in the room was great. Keep up the great work =D can't wait to read the next chappie xD *dances*
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July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like how you made kyuubi his guardian. please update soon. this feels like one of those stories where i'll be on the edge of my seat before too long.
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July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad that Sasuke was okay and that they finally got to meet and talk. :)
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July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just read this story for the first time today. I'm very intrigued. Sounds real sweet so far and you have a good style. Do update soon.
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July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Naruto is so sweet. Thank goodness Sasuke is okay. Hurry with the next chapter!!!