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September 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ahh please finish this story its so good!!
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November 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
............I will forever be your loyal fan girl.......I was reading this in class and well....I am an open book when ever I get an emotion I react to it......when ever sasuke did something I either screamed "yes" "finally" or just did a little happy dance.........now my whole class is addicted to your fiction.......I am the only girl in my class...... :)
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November 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is great i love it
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November 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ow and thanks to my brother every on in the library at his school is reading it as well.........
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November 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOO why must it end, finish it quickly PLEASE!!!!!!!!
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October 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i have to day this is the one of the top if not the best use of explaining how 'i a guy got knocked up even though i sport a dick'
i love you i feel very bad for the poor pregnant blond who walked all that way, and its going to be for nothing 'cause the guy is dead.' i think you should give him some ramen for that
i love you i feel very bad for the poor pregnant blond who walked all that way, and its going to be for nothing 'cause the guy is dead.' i think you should give him some ramen for that
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May 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love the set up, and the fact that you got the idea from school's biology class! I was also interested about DNA in my classes, but I was more curious about diseases and mutations and tweaking the DNA (combining for example human and cat) ;)
I also love the way you've portrayed the characters, especially the new deeper dimension you've given Naruto. It seems like it's really and truly him. I'm fond of the way you showed that the villagers need Naruto. It gave me a whole new outlook on things. I also love how the relationship between Sasuke and Naruto has grown. It doesn't seem rushed at all - it moves at just the right pace. And the way you write is nice. It flows :D
I sincirely hope you keed writing, you have an awesome fic!
I also love the way you've portrayed the characters, especially the new deeper dimension you've given Naruto. It seems like it's really and truly him. I'm fond of the way you showed that the villagers need Naruto. It gave me a whole new outlook on things. I also love how the relationship between Sasuke and Naruto has grown. It doesn't seem rushed at all - it moves at just the right pace. And the way you write is nice. It flows :D
I sincirely hope you keed writing, you have an awesome fic!
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January 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is simply amazing! You don't get good stories like this one here anymore.... matter of fact anywhere really. It's very rare to find a story as good as this one and I hope you continue it. Usually these stories are nothing but lemons, lemons, and more lemons. But you are doing such a great job, please continue!
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January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Review ch.8
Why don't they just selectively abort the fetus that kyuubi wants? Seems like that would be the obvious solution.
Why don't they just selectively abort the fetus that kyuubi wants? Seems like that would be the obvious solution.
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January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ch.20
Time for a new council, I say assassination. Just get rid of the council and Danzou in one fail swoop. And I'm sure between the rookie 9, Gai's team and all the sensei's (and I'm sure Gaara and his siblings would be willing to help), they could manage that easily.
Time for a new council, I say assassination. Just get rid of the council and Danzou in one fail swoop. And I'm sure between the rookie 9, Gai's team and all the sensei's (and I'm sure Gaara and his siblings would be willing to help), they could manage that easily.