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for Parthenogenesis

by TRG

person naruchan
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
(Damnit, it keeps only posting like half of my review >.< I've had to remove it and then add it again like three times already..)

Wow. I just had the FUNNIEST mental image! Kyuu as a baby. Like, a little tiny bundle of squish. Then the little innocent baby leaping up and pulling kunai out of thin air and running around attacking people. It's the perfect definition of "ninja baby"... I love Kyuu XD

Anyways, on to the point... SQUOOT! ADORABLE! *mucho huggles* I totally melted when Sasuke put his hand on Naruto's stomach, that was one of the most squee-worthy mental images I've ever had. I actually said 'awww!' out loud and my little cousin asked me what I was 'awwing' at... so I had to come up with an excuse. I said kittens. I guess it isn't ENTIRELY wrong... kinda-sorta-ish lol

And Naruto having to disguise himself as a woman? That's gonna be HILARIOUS! I can see Sasuke talking to some dude who runs an Inn saying "And this is my wife, Haruko (or whatever name)" then Naruto stomping on Sasuke's foot hard enough to break bones xD

You know I love this story to bits... so keep giving me more! Even if it takes longer between updates soon, I don't care, I'm hooked. If you stop posting this thing I'm gonna need rehab and therapy and... okay, maybe I need therapy now, but I'll still end up in the hospital from fluff-withdrawals. Don't make an innocent me suffer, keep on writing ^_^
person Anon
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I would like to see those two found their own village, once the children are born. Call the Hidden Sky Village. They would have their own home and ppl would not be afraid to come and settle there because of Naruto. They would be happy and not have to worry explaining to children as they get other about the hateful looks they get because Naruto is their 'mother'. I hope you make one of the babies a girl too. Hurry with the next chapter!!
person moose
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yes you must be on crack!! dont deny it kid!!! lmao that was the most fluffiest thing i've read!! lol you are still amazing!! amazizizing!! don't worry you are definitely not the only one on crack >.< i feel like this will be soooooooo emotional im actually really excited over it ahahahaha keep it up!!
schedule July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
^_^ I loved chapter 11!! It was really sweet when Sasuke put his hand on Naruto's belly. He must really be shocked, and happy that his biggest dream is coming true. update soon!
person Stacy
schedule July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this story has a great story line!
i wake up every day just to see if you updated.
***buuuuuuut*** please let sasuke and naruto have some hot beefy sex before long.
Please!!
person Ashlee
schedule July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
There is really only one way to get rid of those rules.

Get rid of the elders, xD

Great chapter. I have been hanging around in the male/male area waiting for your updated, lol
person naruchan
schedule July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay, I feel loved! XD *gives cookies* Thanks for the dedication, it rocks.

Aaaaand OMG, this idea is sooo different from anything I've ever read before! I still can't get over that. It's like, once you've read one SasuNaru fic you've read a whole bunch of them really, since they tend to follow the same rough outline, but this is so entirely off the beaten path that I can't even begin to fathom where it's headed. I'm really worried about the babies myself, and I'm worried about Kyuubi as well. I don't know why, I just am. *crazyness*

It's great that Sasuke and Naruto are gonna get some time away from Konoha, throwing them into new (or at least not-commonly-used) setting is bound to make things more interesting. In the fic I'm working on that sorta happens too... just in a COMPLETELY different way.

Anyways, I just hope that you didn't take anything that flamer-person said seriously. That was totally suckie of them. Tons of people love the story so don't let one person discourage you even a tiny bit ^_^

<3<3<3
Jun
schedule July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awwww that was great i can't wait for the next update, i would give you a cookie but that damn roomie of mine keeps eating them hahaha ^_^
person Nanaka
schedule July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love the story, just got something i have to say... The final law said "For the sole purpose of preventing any chance of offspring under the Kyuubi’s influence, Uzumaki Naruto may never marry nor partake in the act of sexual intercourse".... loophole there, they certainly aren't maried and they didn't concieve the kids through sex, so technically he didn't break the law... it just says that he can't marry or have sex (though thats just cruel)... it says nothing about him havng children through other means... though im sure they'll just make another law to correct that, and will prolly try and kill the kids anyway, so going away for awhile is probably a good idea anyway
person AngelR
schedule July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love the story...keep up the good work...