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for Parthenogenesis

by TRG

person Anon
schedule July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cool! Naruto is pregnant. Awesome! Wonder how long it will take for him and Sasuke to figure it out? Hurry with the next chapter!!!
schedule July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was a surprise i didn't expect kuubyi to make himself some siblings. are they all going to be the same sex or different. how are they going to figure out that sasuke is the father and not kuubyi. thanks for the update.
person Chria
schedule July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is getting good! How Kyuubi believes in Murphy’s law is just so awsome and perfect cause you pointed how how his life sucks. haha Keep going and thanks for updating so quick!
schedule July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Baa-chan is gonna kick herself sooooo hard. Oh, poor boys, parents before they even got some loving!! Can't wait to see Sasuke's face when he finds out.

Thank you!!
person Anon
schedule July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What just happened with those two? As for your questions, I think Akari or Tenshi would be great names if the child is a girl or Sora or Tai if its a boy. Hurry with the next chapter!!
schedule July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cool cliffhanger!! Can't wait until the next chapter! To answer your second question, I think that Naruto may have been put into school earlier than the others, maybe to give him something to do (keep him out of trouble) since he had no parents. Also so that the teachers could help with watching over him. That's the only thing I can think would be the answer since he is 3 months younger than Sasuke and Sasuke being a genius wouldn't have failed anything.
schedule July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I personally would name the kid Arashi if it was a boy because Arashi means "Tempest" and Naruto's name translates roughly to "Malestrom", or at least that's what I've read, anyway Arashi would be good also because of Sasuke's 'stormy' nature.
schedule July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
whoa with your story. i like that kuubyi is using sasuke and naruto to get out and is not really concerned about naruto's feeling for sasuke. this is a novel idea because usually naruto is born able to concieve or kuubyi modifies him. i have not read a story where he gets them together so he can create a body this is really cool. i have a couple of questions though. are you going to continue the story after kuubyi is born and for how long after (like newborn, one year, or five years later). will you show how kuubyi is influenced by having sasuke and naruto as parents. when kuubyi is born since he will be a half demon will he age differently. when sasuke stepped into the circle thing (orry) did he get the ability to bear children too. i am also a little confused how would 2 yy chromosomes get together without something to stick them together. as for the baby's name i think it should be araishi but not because that's the name that everyone says is naruto's father. it is because with sasuke and naruto as his parents and kuubyi as the baby's soul he could not help to be anything but a storm and araishi means tempest. i also believe that naruto started younger than the other children because he had no parents and they used the school system like daycare. thanks and can't wait til the next update.
person Ashlee
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
-pulls out a review from my pocket-

Ohh so Gaara is interested with Naruto. This is good, lol.

Great job with the chapter. Me love it. Poor Sasuke, doesn't like ramen while everyone else does (Naruto, me, Naruto, xD)
person saki
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke (Mr. Denial) and Gaara fighting over Naruto is hot and a favorite of mine. Love the story!