rate_review Reviews

No need to offend...But please re-edit this whole second chapter. All of it is in bold and the paragraphs are not spaced out...making it very hard to read as it is hard enough with all the bold letters.

TYPO!! He folowed the boy, being... I think you know how to spell that...follow.

>o< Awesome! I bet Naruto´s stealing (stealing is wrong and should be punished...oh who the hell am I kidding...) some of those fertility scrolls...Awesome >...
-Damp *Please continue this fic, as it is very pleasing and very interesting!*

OOH, you really got my attention now. I can't wait to read what happens next XD!!

This story was great! Update soon!

well i'm impressed. sad that i wont have internet access for a while to keep up with the developements of this story *cries* but when i come back i wanna see lots of chapters cause i think this story has alot of potential

I smell potential, please continue this. I also like your writing style.

that was very interesting i can't wait for the next chapter

that's nice.