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Chapter 5: XD Love the beginning. I have no clue what’s going on, but it’s funny. XD (Hang on, this chapter doesn’t have a title.) . . . . I like that bit, about how Sasuke was referring out loud to a conversation earlier. . . . I like this kind of depressed mood they’ve got. Heh, and then I like Naruto’s joke about Orochimaru getting a tan. XD And then I like how he ends it by saying, “By leaving us for him, you put us in danger.” Good line. . . . How sad and ironic that Sasuke didn’t get his chance to defeat Orochimaru and he got dragged back with limbs broken anyway. . . . I really like the part about how Naruto being a Jinchuuriki explained so much, and yet there was one thing that it didn’t explain. I liked that part. ♥ . . . . Heh. Did Sasuke forget about the Kyuubi’s interference? I guess if he’s tired, that would make sense. And really he offered to come just so somebody else wouldn’t come. He kinda forgot about the risk. Clever. Very subtle. . . . Oooh, cool. Just a bit of seduction. Kyuubi gets right down to it, doesn’t he?
Heh, what a surprise. ^_^ Lol, “Whatcha *yawn* doin’ on the floor, Sasuke?” Cute. X3 . . . . XDD “a jutsu he had copied from some opponent or another.” XDD Love how “whatever, who cares” that sentence was. ^^ . . . . There’s something really funny and kind of random about the line, “puppy-dog eyes don’t work on an asexual.” =) . . . . Lemme guess: ramen stands?
Guess not. ô_ô . . . . I like how Sasuke feels relaxed after hanging out. Like, “this isn’t so bad.” =) . . . . WTF? “Naruto had already climbed headfirst under the covers with his feet on the pillows” . . . the hell? õ_ô Why? . . . . Awww. . . . Those traps. Sasuke, if you don’t make a move, Gaara’s going to make a move. And if you hadn’t trusted Neji, how can you be so blasé about Gaara?
Uh-oh. Now what? Where’d Naruto go off to? . . . . Love all the “might’ve noticed” parts. . . . . Nice effect when Sasuke steps on the seal. (I’m reading the Anita Blake series, so I like that part.) =D . . . . Oooh-hoo-hoo, (*chuckles excitedly*) “The Uchiha . . . this changes everything.” =DD

Wheee, now I’m excited! >w< . . . . No, I’m not confused, just excited! ^_^

1) Hmmm, tough one. (*drums fingers on table, thinking*) . . . I’m not great with names and their meanings, and I don’t want to spend forever on this (I’ll probably mention other ideas after future reviews, cuz I have ADD), but just now the female name Akiko popped into my head. I don’t know why, it just did.

2) This question has bothered me too for-like-ever. I’ll have to get back to you on that.

Loving the story so far. Please update and let me know when the new chap is up.

Ahhh! I haven't heard from you in months! =[

I dunno why you're not updating, but I really hope everything with you is going okay!

Feel free to email me at MissMayumi500@yahoo.com

I'd like to know if you're still alive!

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Oh my gosh, I absolutely love this
it's so ingeniusly hilarious
I swear, I was tearing up with laughter for several straight chapters
not like you could ever get this fic "straight" though
XD
buuuuut
nice scenes
loved the last one with the note taking
and baby, that's making me want a ninja for myself, you know?
so any ways
update soon~!
;D

This is a hilariously great story and I can't wait to see more! Pretty please update soon!

Hi, I've really enjoyed the story so far. Do you plan on finishing it?

I like your story. I wonder what will happen to the fourth child.... and technically in even though the Kyuubi created four children and there are 1 out of four odds, there may still be no YY child. Hell, Kyuubi could have created eight children without ever creating a YY child. While probability does play a signifigant role, it is less valid in terms of genetics. For example, gender should be even between male and female, but this rule changes depending on the couple. For some reason some men are more likley to donate the X chromasome and others are more likely to donate the Y. For some men there is no genetic inclination. In my mother's family there are eight children, but only two of them are boys (my uncles feel severly out numbered). Thier father was the only son out of five chidlren. Apparently female gentics are dominate in my mother's family. However my mother's four children are evenly split; my two brothers and then my sister and me.

...wow, I kinda got off track there...meh.....genetics are facinating

I had started reading this a few months ago and just now had the chance to look it back up. I'm glad I did. The names he came up with for the new characters was hilarious. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Aww... why'd you stop, it was just getting good. Kidding, the whole thing is good. Favorite parts sllep walking Naruto/Kyuubi, the midwife, and the names Naruke and SAseme. Not to mention all the science and research that went into the idea behind this story. I hope to see an update soon.

good story plez continue