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October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi i am a big fan of your fanfic and I love it so much!
But you haven`t write in a while yet and I would like to know if you still writting this fanfic.
I hope you will write further, I am looking everyday if you have uploaded the next chapter!
Please finish this fanfic there are so little good storys of sasukexnaruto!!!
Your biggest fan!!
But you haven`t write in a while yet and I would like to know if you still writting this fanfic.
I hope you will write further, I am looking everyday if you have uploaded the next chapter!
Please finish this fanfic there are so little good storys of sasukexnaruto!!!
Your biggest fan!!
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September 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Um so far I'm really liking this story it's great and the science you put into explaining the birth is excellant, I really liked the relationship part is building between the two. It was adorable to have Gaara and Neji pretty much tell Sasuke to get is ass in gear or he was going to lose the one chance he had at happiness.
Ero-sennin spying on them as they were having sex was pretty funny him taking notes for a second story.
I have to small complaints one is: Chapter sixteen you wrote a sentence that didn't make sense "like a pistol on a train," trains don't have pistols that make them move so I think you meant "Like a piston on a train." and the second complaint is when you offered the pairing you wrote Naru/Sasu so when is Naruto going to be the one on top being the Seme or is it Uke?? I get those names mixed up. I know Naruto's pregnant and all but if they are in an equal relationship wouldn't Naruto start demanding the same courtesy from Sasuke as he gives to Sasuke? at least every third time they have sex, or something any way just wanted to know if you are meaning the story to be SasuNaruSasu?
Ero-sennin spying on them as they were having sex was pretty funny him taking notes for a second story.
I have to small complaints one is: Chapter sixteen you wrote a sentence that didn't make sense "like a pistol on a train," trains don't have pistols that make them move so I think you meant "Like a piston on a train." and the second complaint is when you offered the pairing you wrote Naru/Sasu so when is Naruto going to be the one on top being the Seme or is it Uke?? I get those names mixed up. I know Naruto's pregnant and all but if they are in an equal relationship wouldn't Naruto start demanding the same courtesy from Sasuke as he gives to Sasuke? at least every third time they have sex, or something any way just wanted to know if you are meaning the story to be SasuNaruSasu?
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September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I absolutely LOVED this story! Oh My god! 4 kids?!? FOUR? Poor Sasuke, the "responsible" parent. Oh and I loved the next Icha Icha Paridise Yaoi book 2. *Cracks Up Laughing* Gaara was fabulous too! Just to piss off Sasuke, he goes after Naruto! HA HAHAHAHA~!
Oh please say you'll update soon! It's just getting good!
BDQ~
Oh please say you'll update soon! It's just getting good!
BDQ~
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September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmm..I'm really sorry this one-shot is taking forever to get out. Please don't hate me. I feel the more I work on it, the better it'll become.
ILY
ILY
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September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this fanfic your writting is so amazing!
I hope you upload the next chapter as soon as possiblel!!! You describe sasuke and naruto so good. And the lemon was also great! The two are really kinky, i like that ;-)
bye
I hope you upload the next chapter as soon as possiblel!!! You describe sasuke and naruto so good. And the lemon was also great! The two are really kinky, i like that ;-)
bye
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August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i really love your fanfiction
it's so intriguing
ah
and i must ask
is Katashi and Riki off Kakashi and Iruka?
>.>
just asking
cause they had similarities i noticed when i read
^_^
it's so intriguing
ah
and i must ask
is Katashi and Riki off Kakashi and Iruka?
>.>
just asking
cause they had similarities i noticed when i read
^_^
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August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*laughing* Saseme. God. Jiraiya is so corny and BAD that he comes out a WINNAR. Jiraiya = love.
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August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was hawt!!!! I was waiting for that! Jiraiya got a great free show. Update soon!
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August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fun, as always. Thank you!
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August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you know i always thought i had started reading this story before, seems i had not so just read all 17 chapters :D so good! especially that last chapter, J watching an taking notes hahahahah funny but more importantly super hot! when naru rolled over and top and 'sat himself down' whoo *fans self* good stuff