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August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that jiraiya is really a hoot. is he going to ever reveal who riki and katashi is because inquiring minds really want to know. i love this chapter especially sasuke being jealous of the ramen and sasuke being turned on looking at naruto eat the ramen. i can't wait til the next chapter cause i have a feeling that when sasuke and naruto see jiriaya it will be a hoot.
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August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hot lemon!!! It was funny how it was Jiraiya that found them instead. Wonder how they will feel when they read the 2nd Yaoi book? XD
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August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Raises eyebrows*
Naruke and Saseme
No, you can do better then that!! Come ON! It'll be so OVBIOUSE that it was Naruto and Sasuke, Jairya (Can't spell his name) was spying on.
-Damp *HAHA!! That was hysterical, I can't believe Jairya would spy on GAY PEOPLE!*
Naruke and Saseme
No, you can do better then that!! Come ON! It'll be so OVBIOUSE that it was Naruto and Sasuke, Jairya (Can't spell his name) was spying on.
-Damp *HAHA!! That was hysterical, I can't believe Jairya would spy on GAY PEOPLE!*
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August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha. Ero-Dobe??? That's a cute name!! omfg..I love it when Naruto rides Sasuke..thanks soo much!!!! Naruke and Saseme?? Hahha..that's original!!
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August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*LAUGHING HER ASS OFF!!*
Those poor people next door...*still laughing
-Damp *Still laughing...those poor people*
Those poor people next door...*still laughing
-Damp *Still laughing...those poor people*
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August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was sooo HOT except for Jiraya watching them, that was just plain creepy. Awaiting the next chapter!!!
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August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohh, how I've been waiting for this chapter... I love this story - I really do. The little rivalry-rants they have are just too precious :) plus... the smut there at the end... yummie :)
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August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! A wonderful lemon!! Great chapter!! :)
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August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ha ha ha, man the old couple in the next room. I was cracking up. Yeah now Naruto will forever belong to Sasuke. Hopefully together they can figure out something to do about Kyuubi. I really liked the role playing at the beginning.
ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
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August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL!!! I bet that old couple got an ear full that night! Terrific chapter!! Hurry with the next one!!