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Well, Sasuke's established that Naruto's his...is Naruto going to lay his claim as well? Great story...way to end the chapter on a laugh!

AHHHHHHHHHHHH! I WANT MORE!

role play whoa ha now that's the way to start the loving. i only wnat to know if katishi and riki are supposed to be kakashi and iruka and if jiraiya just changed their names to put in his freaky book. i can't wait til you update and i get to see the next chapter.

Mm! I loved it! The part where Naruto was like, "I don't know what comes next in the book" and Sasuke was like "I'll show you" Mm...Mm...Mm! Haha, it made me laugh, imagining the elder couple, they were probably like "What the hell is going on over there!" They probably knew...Haha, the 'squeaking of the bed.' nice. absolutely nice. I loved this chapter! I hope demon of redemption is getting updated soon? Please don't become discouraged and not finish it! I will go on a rampage! Also, would you mind reading/reviewing my story, The Ramen Club, and tell me what you think?? ^^

Aww Man I Want More! I Cant Wait To See How Sasuke Ask Naruto To Be His Boyfriend. And I Hope Later On In The Story We See There Kids Growing Up. And Call Me Stupid But Is That Book Kakashi Gave Them Real?! Update Soon!

I looooooooove this! When is Sasuke going to get Naruto in bed, I hope before the babies are born, then he can honestly say he slept with him.

LOL! It was funny when Naruto told Sasuke about having sex with a clone that looked like Sasuke. I love how Sasuke took that. :)

Great chapter! Poor Naruto. If only he had lost his virginity to Sasuke instead. Hopefully Sasuke is a virgin still? I was confused, when you had Katashi and the other guy from the yaoi Icha Icha. Wouldn't it be funny, if Jiraiya watches Naruto and Sasuke get it on. And then he makes a new Icha Icha. Only with characters like Sasuke and Naruto. hahaha...I haven't seen a new Parthenogenesis lately. Thanks for updating.

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Oh God - I loved Naruto's confession about having sex with a clone of Sasuke. And thank you lord for someone finally admitting that clones go poof when they get hit so how in the hell can they be uke. I've read so many stories where Naruto practices with the clones and they're the uke and I always think - how, wouldn't they vanish at the first thrust?? I loved the icha icha yaoi edition section too :) at first I was like WTF but it all made sense in the end.