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for Parthenogenesis

by TRG

person Damp
schedule August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really didn´t like the fact that Naruto fucked a whore...and that after that he experimented with himself...Although I did love the fact that he made himself bottom xDDDD.

-Damp *´Once an uke, always an uke´...That is SOOOOO true.*
person Anon
schedule August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe. Those two. hurry with the next chapter!!!
person Gwyllion
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Waaah! What a great story!! I can't wait to read what happens next. Sasuke's so cute here trying to take care of an hyperactive naruto. :3 Keep it up! I'm loving this fic...<3
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
a trip of self discovery cliched and corny but i really like it because it is so true. are sasuke and naruto going to find out more things about each others past. i think that's wise as well. maybe while they are on there road trip they can be attacked by the "dawn" people (you know itachi's group) and run into the guy who is supposed to be obito (can't spell this either). sorry for such a tacky review but i really do love this story. so thanks for the update and can not wait to see the next one.
person Anon
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Will Sasuke tell Naruto what he found out? Hurry with the next chapter!!
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oo! Sasuke and Naruto are gunna get hitched! lovely! Naruto learned a lot from ero-sennin, ne?
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dude! This story is freakin' Awesome! Everything fits together. So nicely thought out. So well written. (sniffle) I'm so PROUD of you! And I don't even know you. That's how AWESOME you're doing. I LOVED every second of this and I can't wait to read more. Thanks so much for posting this, and please keep up the excellent work!(nice guy pose)

Love and Kisses :P
dagget
person Lechan
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story has so far been one of the best I've read so far. The relationship building is believeable for the two of them, and the explination of the whole pregnacy thing is very much appriciated. ^-^ For a first lime, that was very hot, and I can say it had all the fundimentals that I've ever needed in my lime/lemon enjoyment. ^-^ So great job there! I love that you encorpirated the blood relation to Yondaime. ^-^ I love the stories where that is brought to the attention of Naruto. Hopefully that will keep the Council from killing thier kids and maybe taking the resrictions off of Naruto. Something that I would lOVE to see but it would be very out of character and most likely far out of your story line so I doubt I'll see it (But I can dream right?) is Kyuubi getting his new body, only to be like a normal baby and grow up learning to love and having his plans thwarted by himself. ^-^ I just find that to be a very entertaining image. While on the issue of Kyuubi, I like how you gave Kyuubi's sections the tiltes that you did. It made me smile, his insights were nicely written as were the informitive bits in the begining. The way you added in the relation to Konoha ninja's and whatnot was very well written making it sound fact and not fiction, and it made the otherwise borning biological bable very interesting and understandible. ^-^ Thank you, and I hope to see more chapters soon. ^-^
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You have outdone ourself. Thank you. I can just see Sasuke's face - priceless. It's a bit strange that she would mention this, I mean wouldn't somebody have sworn her to secrecy or something? I guess it's senility setting in. Again thank you, this was wonderful!
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NOooo@@@!! Shocking revelations then a cliff hanger??? NOOOOOooooOOOOOOOO!!!!

(See, this is the reaction we should all have, had we not all come with the preconcieved and generally accepted notion that the fourth is Naruto's father. Its so freaking obvious. ^^ hehe. Great chapter, btw.)