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Love this story:) Ok! I love all your stories:) I miss you! There hasn't been a Zrinaday in along while. I'm having major withdraws:) But to help I always come back and do some rereading. I hope you didn't thing your self proclaim #1 fan would forget about you huh?!(not likly) So next I'm going to my all time favorite Sound of Dreams. Miss you ^_^

I didn't want to log in (being the lazy ass that I am xD) but I just had to login to review this piece.

Heh. Since no one else has brought it up yet, I loved that quote from Sasuke:

“If I had never met him, I would have died inside a long time ago."

Masterfully placed into the whole scheming of things. Hit the nail right on the head.


Hope to see more from you you marvelous writer.

Damn! I have never read anything like that before. Another great work from you. Too bad it's a one shot, but you gave the fic closure. The depth of understanding between Naruto and Sasuke was wonderful to see. They compliment each other so well. Hope to read more great fics from you. Ja ne!

Wow this was... so great. It was really cool to see these three's feelings for each other, just how complicated but yet simple you put it. You really catched me through the whole thing there! *smiles*

i cant tell if i like this story. i dont like the fact that there si sasusaku. i HATE that. its horrible. and i really wish sakura would have just stayed out.

The beginning is a little unclear, but I guess it’s supposed to be. . . . No, Sakura, back out now while you still can. . . . Wishful thinking, girl. . . . This is a really interesting idea, Zrina. . . . I like the background in it, how far they planned ahead. . . . I guess Sakura’s mind is really clouded in this. . . . I don’t blame you, Sasuke. By the way, Zrina, you probably have already, but have you read Teamwork and the sequels and sidestories by Asuka Kureru (aka Askerian)? . . . Boy, that was a dumb thing to say, Naruto. Kind of insensitive too, if you ask me. . . . Tough luck, Sakura. If he doesn’t want to, he doesn’t want to. . . . NUH-UH! You’re just going to feel a lot worse afterwards if you go through with this, girl!! It’s not worth it! Sex doesn’t change a man! . . . “It was probably bad form to insult your bed partner.” Yeh-heah, I would think so. ^^ . . . Wise words, Sasuke. . . . I guess that’s better than nothing, Sakura. Though it might be less painful to just move on. But then if you see him all the time . . . hmm . . . I dunno. . . . Boy, this must be hard on Sakura; she’s being pretty much ignored right now. . . . God, how can Sakura bear to watch this? I mean, it must be emotionally painful for one thing, but . . . well . . . while I don’t mind reading about it, I’d be really embarrassed to be in the same room with two guys having sex. And if I had to be, I wouldn’t want to watch. . . . I don’t blame you, Sasuke. Sakura should have just minded her own business. . . . I like it when Naruto starts growling (*cough*). . . . Wow, I’ve never read a story with such confusing emotions! 0_0 That’s enough to lead anyone to a breakdown!

I am actually glad she got the ultimate let down- I wad actually hoping for some ultra sensitive Naruto laying on the guilt and exposing her deviousness...but this ended well. It seems so much more...satisfying that her own machinations turned on her and shattered her illusions. I just feel that she needs to be hurt more for all that she did *shakes fist*.

I thinks this has to be my favorite out of all that you have written. I can't describe how I felt after reading it the first time. Or second and fifth time either. It would be interesting to see what it would be like, in your words, for Sasuke,Naruto and Sakura when the baby is born. Thank you for sharing this.

*waterfall tears* I loved reading this SO much. I was so glad when she realized the meaning behind what she was doing and the true gift that it would be to her two closest friends that really DID love her in their own way.

Only one word for you: Wow. Your writing style is amazing. You have the characters interaction well-written. The smut part was well-written as well. Awesome work.