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Oh I liked that, I liked that a lot. It was hot, yet tender. Sensual, and yet so very erotic. I think you portrayed Sakura perfectly, showing how truley obsessive she is, and yet redeeming her in the end to show that she is just a lonely girl who is very confused. A truely excellent one-shot. My best wishes for you and your writing.

I'd feel sorry for Sakura, if it weren't for the fact that she was the one doing the sabatoging in the first place. Another well written fic. Keep up the good work! ~ Jelp

This was a beautiful story!!!!!!
Even tho' I am not a Sakura-basher,
I think that she got just what a
schemer like her should have....
a new out-look on life!!!!!!
I hope that you are writing something
new,'cos I really like your style!!!!!
It was *yaoilicious*!!!!!!

Ba ha ha. Silly Sakura. Loved the piece. Great to read. And I think you just wrote a one shot that doesn't scream for expanding on. :D It was a one shot was it not?

Whoa such a serious situation and yet so figgin HOT!!!!!!!!!!

'm not usually against Sakura but what she did was wrong and she realised it too late that what she'd done shouldn't have been done at all, she agreed to help them with the wrong intetions in mind and she just ended up hurting herself more and also intruding on pther people's intimacy - it really pissed me off - however loool the smut soo helped me feel better looooool :D so yeah. Hotness. Thanks!!! looool your 'attempts' as you put it at oneshots always seem to do the trick for me lol and everything you write with those two is sexy as hell, so yeah :D

Hina xXxx

You are a god with keeping things IC. I bow to you....

I REALLY like this, though i kind of feel bad for Sakura, though she also deserved it for butting in. great story hope to read more of your work.

MMMMMM that was really really hot (nosebleed)!

ha! take that Sakura! mm..Naruto and Sasuke have become voyeurists in a way, ne?..if that was me instead of Sakura..I wouldn't be just sitting there watching them..but if it was a yaoi fangirl..her dream probably came true..

ooh! I was looking at your other stories...Congratulations on having 1231 reviews!!...I think thats a record...anyway, i just wanted to say that I like your stories :)..and I loved this awesome smut filled oneshot! hope there'll be more like this!! :)