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for The Unexpected

by Hekikuu

schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
PLs pls pls, continue.
schedule March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really liked the begining of this, you should pick it back up.
schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update this!
schedule October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
more....please this can't be a oneshot...too good.
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD> > > > This better not be a one shot. I want to find out what happens when they "finish it later," heh.

I mean, sure, I've got a good idea of whats to come... but its just not as good as actually reading it. >:)

hehe, keep up the good work!
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh damn! you had better finish this!
that was major HOT!!!!

please please PLEASE! more! must have more!
person Anon
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!! That was awesome!!! Hurry with the next one!!
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is... that was hot!!!!
person emp78
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You have to continue! Who's interrupting them and why? When will they finish? Update, Please?
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ending it like that, that's nasty! I just can't stand waiting for the next chapter. Your writing is simple but very much to my liking, go on!