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person featherededge
schedule July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was freakin' AWESOME! so hilarious.
person fangirl
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
FUCK!!!! I had to stop reading so many times just to stop laughing. I can't even pinpoint what was funniest...I couldn't believe you killed off Orlando Bloom..that was priceless. Yay crackfic...twas awesome
person ringpop
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HHAHAHAH great! the knok Sakura out part was fabulous!!!! it was funny!!! normally i don't like one-shots but this one i liked.....i guess kuz it didn't have a plao ...: ) anywhoo GREAT JOBB!
person saki
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Freaking hilarious and to the point. You definitely hit all the crazy moments in the series that make you shake your head and go wtf?! Loved it and will definitely read more of your future postings.
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
abso-fucking-lutely hilaraious!! i could barely breathe after reading this much less think. ^__^
person Adi
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok this was too much

all too much for me

I simply can't do revision today

yup....

OMG THE CRACK KILLED, AND THEN THE SMUT REVIVED ME AND CAUSED ME TO NOSEBLEED TO DEATH.

I've had to rewrite my sentences so many times because I can't spell at the moment, that is what the fic did to me

lol I haven't touched the manga so it was spoiler for me, but does it look like I care? NO! Because it was teh awesome!!!!!!!

What was it? "preteen pedaphile"? *falls over laughing*

*cracks whip* back to work with you, I'm just going out for a cigeratte even though I don't smoke XD

<3<3<3
person hina88
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool heh 'just offer me sex' best line of the whole thing loooooooooooooooooooooool I loved how he used the same lines on Naruto that Sakura used on him, brilliant :D Sasuke's such a pervert lol XD definitely cracked me up ^_6 thanks for this!!!

Hina xXxx
person llyoung
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very funny. I really enjoyed it and look forward to your next story. Thank you.
person cerismea
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
funny!! good funny ^_^
person dragonlay sakura
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have a new appreciation for the crack one-shot! This was hilariously funny and delicious to boot. After all the humor, the sex scene was handled brilliantly. So in other words, IT ROCKED!

~dragonlady sakura~