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goodie!
i like your oneshots!
do you have this on ff.net?
or at least any other way to alert me once you update? :)

NooooooOOOoooOOoo.....you kill me now....the anger and tension I feel here. *kidnaps them* You can't touch them anymore ya hear? *runs in panic* O_O

I love you tho Adiiii. <33333 No more angst!

OMG Adi, I so freaking loved it you have no idea. I've always thought that you were more into funny stuff but that totally blew me away, WOW, just WOW. I love it to bits and you so should write more angst. lol. even though WE KNOW THAT ADI is cool, you should focus on angst *nao's advices rule ~* rofl. so yeah. i found it extremely erotic how naruto was trying to make sasuke kiss him back and they were doing naughty stuff at the same time. omg, fantastic. MOARRRRRR. i know it's a drabble but i want more. excellent work XD narusasu all the way baby. heh.

Um, No. You should totally keep doing it, you write some amazing angst when you do. And they're strong they can take it. That was... Damn Adi I'm not sure what that was but it was really freaking good. *Glomps u and humps* Wish I could take all your stress away, but I can't even log into y! I've been kicked into the living room cause of renovations and so I'm trying to keep my computer time mostly PG. Thank God nobody in my family is bold enough to read over my shoulder. *Hugs* Exams can't last forever *chuu*

Omgoodness you're amazing O_O. This was such a beautiful piece. It made my heart do flipflops T_T I really love it XD You always suceed in creating a perfect Sasuke with a persona neither too submissive nor too dominant. I loved the end scene best XD

You write good smut. I give happy happy XD.

Amazing job as usual! Thanks so much for writing and posting up for us to read. It's always a pleasure to read your work Adi XD!

OH MAN! Another perfect 10! And see? You can write in the nijaverse! It's was wonderful and hot. I liked the style- it was choppy and raw and melancholic-- I loved it. I read all three chapters, but I could really identify with Redemption. *Sigh*

Favorite line was this:

He didn't get further than the door step though, sitting there with his elbows braced on knees, looking at the stars and wondering how he always got it wrong.

I imagine that is what it is like to live with a manic depressive. Where you focusing on anything in particular here or where you just trying to portray angst-ridden Sasuke?

-SaintAlecto from LJ

Forgot to add my email address and meant to say, "Were you foucusing on anything in particular..."

I hate typos... GROWL.

I'm enjoying the story and look forward to when I can read more, but I want to make sure I'm understanding this correctly.

Sasuke and Naruto are in a relationship but Naruto isn't participating in the relationship like a person should be and Sasuke is trying to hide that fact from him because he loves Naruto...?

Hope you update soon. :p

-Touya06

Grate chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so UPDATE SOON.

its kinda sad but it is cute