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And here I thought he was twisted and cast a genjutsu so that it would seem like Naruto WAS hurting him and in reality he wasn't. Oh well.. maybe I'm the one that's twisted up in the head.

You snuck that one up on me!! Was really nice, liked the smexiness of it. Interesting that the expression of love makes Naruto weaker like Sasuke always spouted, but I think it makes Sasuke stronger, though. For him to go to those lengths to protect Naruto shows his depth of emotion. Especially since poor Naruto would probably swear off the smex if he knew how much he was hurting Sasuke.

It was good, that serious element that kept it from being a smut drabble - although hotness was clearly present heh XD

Liked it ^_6
Hina xXxx

Aww, these are so pretty and angsty. I like them, I think you do a good job of writing angst. Yes *nods* I am pleased. I especially liked the third one, I think it's my favorite so far.

I can't leave you for five minutes and you aren't running off writing angsty butt-secks! Whatever am I going to do with you? Well since you exams are done *I think*? Butt-secks away!!!
I liked this one as well, you angstiness deepens. In a few months you'll probably be doing hardcore D/s. I need to keep an eye on you! Now get to work on your outstanding lemon homework!

Wow. reading it the second time over made it even more tragic. I realise now that the first time I read what I wanted to believe. Wanted to believe that it was Sasuke hurting himself and that Naruto would never do such a thing. Which just makes it even sadder in my mind. you really are excellent at angst, the more you write the better you get, and this one was shocking and heartbreaking, and so very sweet, because he hides it, almost like penance. My poor babies both of them. Well done Adi, :huggles: This one is definitely my favourtie drabble so far XD. And p.s. I like your summary XD.

Great chapter!!!!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.

thats sad that even sounds like a sad relationship

That second one was really good, it ached more too *sigh* Naruto really would make allowances for Sasuke that he might now make to anyone else, it's really sad :( , thanks for another great piece ^_^

Hina xXxx

Oh honey you're getting a hell of a lot better at this angst thing. This is positively heart breaking, and so sweet at the end. :Huggles you: (sneaks in a luffle ;D).