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January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just want you to know that I still read your stories from Yu-Gi-Oh to Naruto; and I still think you do a great job at your stories and that each chapter are long to read I just love it. The only thing I have a problem is that you take for ever to up date. You have not even up date The Key Of Ra in Yi-Gi-Oh I really want to see what happens on that story. Please up date your stories soon. your fan AngeloflightPd
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October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is great. I'm really enjoying it, and I hope you update soon. I'd love to see how things work out.
Keep up the good work!
~Angel
Keep up the good work!
~Angel
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October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this!
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October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The last paragraph of chapter six is why I love this story and will come back to it. You are created new story for the Sasuke character that provides a very good paralle to the canon: What would have happened if Sasuke stayed. Many other fanfic authors have tried to do this and in my opinion, they fail horribly because they try to understand the reasons why Sasuke would choose to leave his village and all those who knew and/or cared about him.
The idea is usually snatched from the ether, hardly explained never mind his reason for staying and then it's on to some bland story that leaves the reader wondering if the ever watched Naruto or read the manga. But enough about other writers and other stories. Kyuubi the Bitch is superior to all of them and it should viewed as the standard in the "Sasuke Not Leaving" genre.
Back to why this chapter is reason that I love this story.
Sasuke is so badly broken that it would take someone with a life as equally shattered to understand him. Kakashi has tried to do this because he has been where Sasuke is going and it took Obito Uchiha first stand up to Kakashi by forcing him to confront the reason for his father's death and then Obito's death to free Kakashi. As Sasuke's teacher, Kakashi did not want his own student to repeat his past. But Sasuke had been left too long without proper guidance that could see this.
Sakura could never understand Sasuke mental issues because she has been blinded by her own wants and desires. She wants Sasuke, but she wants a fantasy Sasuke who is quiet, thoughful, and loving. She does not see the scared, messed up little boy running for his life, living each day in terror without end. She can't allow herself to see this because to her that Sasuke does not exist. But it is not just her, almost everyone in the village views Sasuke through a fantasy. He is the dark brooding avenger of the Uchiha Clan. The perfect idea of what Itachi was before he ordered to destroy his clan. They see a romantic figure and they stalk his life, wathcing like a soap opera, tunning each day waiting to see what is going to happen next. It's like the Thruman Show but Sasuke knows where the cameras are.
Naruto knows Sasuke's pain. He sees the madness that tinges around his eyes but he does not turn from it. Naruto believes in Sasuke. Naruto also knows Sasuke is stupid, meaning that he puts himself is dumb situations and it dumb luck that he doesn't get his tail killed. I'm reading the manga and if you are too then you know what I am talking about. He's following Madra Uchiha! A man who can't show Sasuke his face unless he wants to be killed by the fail safe Itachi implanted his brother to protect Sasuke from the crazy bastard. I mean come on, how dumb do you have to be if your dying brother place a trigger on one of his strongest jutsu to set that creeper on fire for coming near your retarded ass. Sasuke is stupid. Sasuke is stupid, Naruto isn't all that bright when it comes to idiot but he knows that with him, Sasuke's stupidity want get either of them killed.
Sorry, I went a little off topic there. But the point I was trying to make is that Naruto understands Sasuke and kills him that Sasuke is desperate and lost...In this chapter, you managed to do what has not been done in the manga, yet. You are healing Sasuke. The little boy screaming in the dark is finally waking up from the long nightmare that has plauged his life for the last five or so years. I can't wait for the latter chapters of this story, Sasuke is starting to grow up and wonder how will you handle the development of his and Naruto's relationship since you put out the spolier one shot. (That one shot explains Naruto's actions towards Sasuke, with his blushing and the belly molesting...well not the belly molesting, it explains the blushing. (Poor little Naruto meeting his future husband who ain't shy and is true student of Kakashi.)) I wonder how will you handle this turn of events in the manga regarding the true about the Uchiha Massacre. I am trying for patience but this that good.
Also when are you going to update Promise? The Naruto character in that story is somewhat frightening due his manipulations of Sasuke. And I love their desperation. But something is lacking between them and it more than the other believing that they love each other. It like Naruto is hurting Sasuke by giving him whatever he wants. I don't know, maybe I am missing something, but that the feeling I got while reading chapter two.
Sean
The idea is usually snatched from the ether, hardly explained never mind his reason for staying and then it's on to some bland story that leaves the reader wondering if the ever watched Naruto or read the manga. But enough about other writers and other stories. Kyuubi the Bitch is superior to all of them and it should viewed as the standard in the "Sasuke Not Leaving" genre.
Back to why this chapter is reason that I love this story.
Sasuke is so badly broken that it would take someone with a life as equally shattered to understand him. Kakashi has tried to do this because he has been where Sasuke is going and it took Obito Uchiha first stand up to Kakashi by forcing him to confront the reason for his father's death and then Obito's death to free Kakashi. As Sasuke's teacher, Kakashi did not want his own student to repeat his past. But Sasuke had been left too long without proper guidance that could see this.
Sakura could never understand Sasuke mental issues because she has been blinded by her own wants and desires. She wants Sasuke, but she wants a fantasy Sasuke who is quiet, thoughful, and loving. She does not see the scared, messed up little boy running for his life, living each day in terror without end. She can't allow herself to see this because to her that Sasuke does not exist. But it is not just her, almost everyone in the village views Sasuke through a fantasy. He is the dark brooding avenger of the Uchiha Clan. The perfect idea of what Itachi was before he ordered to destroy his clan. They see a romantic figure and they stalk his life, wathcing like a soap opera, tunning each day waiting to see what is going to happen next. It's like the Thruman Show but Sasuke knows where the cameras are.
Naruto knows Sasuke's pain. He sees the madness that tinges around his eyes but he does not turn from it. Naruto believes in Sasuke. Naruto also knows Sasuke is stupid, meaning that he puts himself is dumb situations and it dumb luck that he doesn't get his tail killed. I'm reading the manga and if you are too then you know what I am talking about. He's following Madra Uchiha! A man who can't show Sasuke his face unless he wants to be killed by the fail safe Itachi implanted his brother to protect Sasuke from the crazy bastard. I mean come on, how dumb do you have to be if your dying brother place a trigger on one of his strongest jutsu to set that creeper on fire for coming near your retarded ass. Sasuke is stupid. Sasuke is stupid, Naruto isn't all that bright when it comes to idiot but he knows that with him, Sasuke's stupidity want get either of them killed.
Sorry, I went a little off topic there. But the point I was trying to make is that Naruto understands Sasuke and kills him that Sasuke is desperate and lost...In this chapter, you managed to do what has not been done in the manga, yet. You are healing Sasuke. The little boy screaming in the dark is finally waking up from the long nightmare that has plauged his life for the last five or so years. I can't wait for the latter chapters of this story, Sasuke is starting to grow up and wonder how will you handle the development of his and Naruto's relationship since you put out the spolier one shot. (That one shot explains Naruto's actions towards Sasuke, with his blushing and the belly molesting...well not the belly molesting, it explains the blushing. (Poor little Naruto meeting his future husband who ain't shy and is true student of Kakashi.)) I wonder how will you handle this turn of events in the manga regarding the true about the Uchiha Massacre. I am trying for patience but this that good.
Also when are you going to update Promise? The Naruto character in that story is somewhat frightening due his manipulations of Sasuke. And I love their desperation. But something is lacking between them and it more than the other believing that they love each other. It like Naruto is hurting Sasuke by giving him whatever he wants. I don't know, maybe I am missing something, but that the feeling I got while reading chapter two.
Sean
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October 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update!!! I can't wait to read more!!!
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October 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*dies laughing* The fox! Oh, the fox...he makes me laugh so hard! And yet he keeps pushing those two together without meaning to! I love it!
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October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Using the fox to break the tension was a nice move. Hope there's more soon. Thanks for sharing.
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September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lmaooo I think chapter 7 was priceless and soo funny, the end was the best, the cracking of knuckles together and the barbs and everything seeming to be OK now, I loved this and I think you potrayed them really well, they would sooo be in denial and refuse to talk about anything, funny how the fight at the Valley at the End was forgiven but the kiss?? that caused a bigger rift between them??? BOYS!...sheeesh, lol, but you soo gotta love em, and the line about Sasuke saying "Dont you mean your ass?" haha, so hes been thinking about it huh???? hehe I soo want to see it happen soon, thank you for updating this, its one of my favorite fics and I LOVE the fox, sort of see the fox still around when they have those damn uchiha babies, playing with the little baby, watching over it, or its kits playing with Naru and Sasu's kits hehe too cute...anyhow I soo cant wait for more, hope to read more soon, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*bounces up and down and squeals in delight* YOU UPDATED!!! OMG!!! Sorry, I was just thinking about your stories and then saw this during a sleepless night. Wonderful job!!!!
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September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It certainly was worth the wait!!!
And I loved thi chapter too!!! Also I can't wait for naruto to stop is denial, at least sasuke seems like he understood. Anyway even with him being stuborn I Loved it! Because even in denial he still got blushes enjoyed the kisses and all!
Anyway I will be looking forward again for your next chapter!!!
And I loved thi chapter too!!! Also I can't wait for naruto to stop is denial, at least sasuke seems like he understood. Anyway even with him being stuborn I Loved it! Because even in denial he still got blushes enjoyed the kisses and all!
Anyway I will be looking forward again for your next chapter!!!