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was wondering when hed show his fuzzy snout again,so does this mean sasuke will continue to chase the fox around in his underwear?did he even notice his state of undress.glad they actually got outta their funk before this chapter ended,i was hoping they would.they really are like a couple or a married couple,always one steps up to defend the other if theres danger,and thats just what sasuke die defend his mate.well no matter how long it takes hope you can update

Reading this chapter asserts my support for SasuNaru and it strengthens it!

I love how Sasuke has finally let down his guard and the lonely child that he was in the past. To form a new Sasuke one that is more conscious of others as well as being aware of his own feelings for his dobe. I'm glad that Naruto subconsciously considers Sasuke to be his and Kyuubi plays mind tricks with him to get Naruto to realize those feelings. The hospital scene was utter love in Sasuke's part as for Naruto well he's getting there and he does see Sasuke as family... hopefully as something more after he stops being in denial and accepts it. Sasuke for his part has accepted it seems and like any boy who likes a girl( this case being Naruto)he starts to bother and hit to get Naruto's attention.I like how these two interact they don't need words to express their feelings their actions are enough and I think you did it brilliantly.

I do feel sorry for Naruto practically all the adults know how the two feel about each other. I did like how Naruto was angsty about his(Sasuke) walrus cap. At least that broke the ice and they were comfortable around each other. Guess Naruto likes the warm feeling of sleeping next to Sasuke. The whole pee scene was great Naruto wasn't bothered that he and Sasuke looked like lovers curled up. Well not in his mind but rather that he feared Orochimaru was there when it was just the small fox who I think is Sasuke's true enemy.



Overall, great chapter a few spelling errors but other than that think the not talking out between the two boys was in character for them.

Yay! You've updated! Yay! I love how Naruto made you write the story his way and not the way you wanted to write it. I like this chapter, it was very fun to read. ^^

-Damp *Yay! Naruto and Sasuke are bff's again!*

I agree. Rewriting the chapter event for event would have been incredibly boring. I'm glad you kept jumping from past to present.


Keep up the good work. ^^

I loved it! It was kind of weird, but enjoyable nonetheless, and the emotions throughout were strong and really caught me up. I can't wait to see how this pans out! If I were you I wouldn't bother re-writing this and I'd just move forward. I see what you mean about it turning out a little awkward, what with the disjointed flashbacks and psychological scenes mixed in, but I think it really helped the story get from point A to point B (and Sasuke's a painfully awkward kid. Comes with the writing-in-his-mindset territory, I'd say.). The way you wrote Sasuke losing sight of the reason he sought power until the end and the influence the heaven seal had on him was very well done and creepily believable. I was a little green after all that skin-melting-away stuff, but the scene was supposed to be gruesome, right?! Haha. I look forward to an update. Shit, as an adult, those two are such an emotional, abandoned, and heart-wrenchingly powerful mess I sure as hell wouldn't know how to punish and/or help them with their situation! Here's hoping Tsunade is better at it than me?

Wow. Your story is amazing.

I love the whole inner child thing

And Sasuke stays!

Are you going to have a time skip or just continue with thier training?

wow, it keeps getting better and better, i love it its like watching a movie better than a movie

Wow. you are amazing! This story was soooooooo good! Lexjamandme recommended it to me and i'm so glad she did. Really super. What a great balance. So heart warming and heart wrenching with some insanely funny parts too. I really should have reviewed every chapter but I just had to keep going. They're all so long too! How long is an average chapter?!? Anywho, i can't wait to read more. That wasn't the end right? There's more, right???? God i hope so. This had a touch of an end feeling to it so i was worried but you did say see you i a week or so...okay i'm rambling. Newho, this story is amazing and you should be so proud of it!!!!!
Cheers
Meg

loving this, cant wait for the next chapter.

i liked it especially that he plans to battle the fox as a hobby.so i dont know does sasuke see himself as narutos mate or did he even register what the fox called him? well hope you can update soon