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I reaaaaally liked how sasuke stayed in the village and let out his inner child!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter to come with naru waking up and how life goes on with all the changes!!!
But I will be truthful with all the flashbacks and premonitions(there were times were you were talking about the future, right?) things got kind of confusing, but in the end I think I understood.
PLEASE WRITE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!

that...was...comical gold. My god, that was unbelievable. What a great start. God i can't wait to read more. That was so fucking funny! You wrote it so well too. The characters were bang on, bang on. Very nice. I'm so impressed. I was planning on getting some writing done tonight but i don't think that's still an option. I have to keep reading.
Cheers
Meg

AAAARRRGHHH!!!!! Write faster...*bangs head on keyboard*

I need more story...it's soooo good.....SOOOO GOOD!!! *shakes fist* XDDD

Loved this chapter, the interaction between Naruto and Sasuke were very in-character. I can't wait to read more!

Excellent! I need more!

oh man I was soo happy to see a new chapter and when I read this I was suprised to see that it was in fact two, I must of missed one along the way, cant tell you how much I totally adore this fic and if I havent reviewed before I apologize and want to tell you what a wonderful fic this is, and the last chapter totally depicted Sasukes inner child being free, if the door being ripped open to never be closed again wasnt a sign then the graves of his family and him in the sun would of been a dead give away, I totally loved this chapter and I am glad that he did not go with Orochimaru, I know that in the Anime/Manga he does but I think if it had happened in this fic, it would of been to long and way wrong for the way you have the plot set up, totally loved it this way, and Kyuubi is such a royal BIOTH, ya the title says it but man she totally is one, ok enough babble, loved the chapters and the fic in general and so cant wait to read a new chapter soon, loving this fic sooo much, cant wait for more, poor Sasu, lost to a fox hehe, too cute, update soon, ty ty ty for the read, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)

I can't WAIT!!! XD But I'm sorta getting the timeline confused... Is it four years later or four years ago or something? o.O Please write the next chappie soon! ^^

yay!! Sasuke's dumbass didn't leave after all! Love the way that you handled the last few chapters. Very emotional, very exciting, and made of total *win*! XD

Now, if Sasuke had only been that smart in the manga. :(

I loved it!! /hugs

I Love this story because its the joys and woes of puberty but at an intense level seeing as they are shinobi. Sasuke is angsty but sarcastic and his insights are hysterical. He is traumatized easily and is comical in his inner monologues. Then Sasuke gets all deep and constantly pondering on the past when he has his moments. I was laughing just imagining Sasuke cosplay as Lee rather than join in Sakura's and Naruto's debate

I love all those unknown feelings that Sasuke is experiencing, he is unclear of Naruto's possessiveness. On the other hand, Naruto being jealous that Sasuke will be taken away and leave him. As for Naruto, I found it very interesting that he was the one that found Sasuke after the massacre and decided that the emotionally broken boy just like him was now his. After all Naruto is also possessive when it comes to Sasuke his own desire to keep Sasuke from leaving despite putting his friends in danger says much about his character.


I seriously thought that in this chapter Sasuke was going to leave. I found the twist that you made interesting. I can’t wait to see how team seven will grow up. Aside from that Sasuke became the rational boy he knows that he will be used in return for power and that he decided to stay and train while seeing that the only place he could be is with Naruto. And I think the small fox Ahou made him realize this live for Naruto on him to stop living in the past and getting revenge along with Naruto as well as establishing something that he has lost but could now gain,.

And I think these lines that you wrote in the fourth chapter sums it up for me:


He was going to help him. Again.

After all, if he didn’t help the dobe, who would?




Seriously they are married and don't know it. Poor boys

Well that was exciting and sad. What will happen now? Hurry with the next chapter!!