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for Kyuubi the Bitch

by Lechan

schedule May 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you decided not to let Sasuke go to Sound. And him making the Fox his newest rival was good too. You defently got the point that Sasuke is healing across. I can't wait to see what happens next. How will Konoha deal with an almost missing-nin?
person Damp
schedule May 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! You finally named the fox!! <- trying to look on the bright side of things.

-Damp *Keep up the awesome work!!*
schedule May 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Personally I think it was a brilliant portrayal of Sasuke. On the inside the bastard has to be feeling something. Just because Uchihas don't broadcast their feelings, doesn't mean they don't have them.
And I always thought that to each other, to their loved ones they were probably more open. Even in manga, Sasuke's mother tells Sasuke that when her and his father were alone, Fugaku only talked about Sasuke. So they do have feelings, share feelings... just with a select few and I think we can all agree that Naruto is Sasuke's 'select few'. ;)
That said, I ADORED this line.

"He had two missions in life. Beating the fox would be his hobby."

The whole thing was so intense and that little line, somewhat lighter, still held so much weight.
Lovely chapter. Looking forward to more.

schedule May 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just had to review chapter three for that scene where it's Sasuke trying to keep his hurt little boy trapped in that room. That was such a powerful image. Really amazing.
schedule May 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. It is sooooo good. I'm glad Sasuke stayed. I wonder how Naruto will act towards him when he wakes up. Will he forgive him right away. Did Naruto hear Sasuke's promise?
Also do you have an update email list? If so could I please be put on it. I don't want to miss a chapter!
schedule May 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really good chapter, makes me wonder how things would turn out with him not going to Oro... so I'm looking forward to the next chapter!!
person Mort
schedule May 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Kick a** chapter- well worth the wait-
person LumiiSol
schedule May 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Goodness I adored this chapter. I don't think Sasuke was out of character at all, at least within the context of how his emotions could be after a battle like that. I am soo glad that he decided to stay, I would have cried if he left. Heheh, that little Ahou is adorable though. This chapter was definitely worth the wait! Can't wait for Naruto's perspective; keep up the good work!
schedule May 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the new chapter!! I'm so glad that Sasuke has learned his lesson and that he won't abandon Naruto again! I wish the real Naruto series had been like this!
schedule May 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My heart...x.o