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May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow, it had been so long between chapter 3 and 4 that i had nearly put you on my 'don't hold your breath for an update - ever' list, but I am beyond euphoric for 2 new chapters! i went back and read the 1st 3 chapters, i really love this story. however long it takes for the next part will be worth it ^_^
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May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Agh! The evil cliffy of doooooommm!!!! I can't wait for the next update!
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May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
MOAR!!!
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May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this. Can't wait for updates Xxx
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May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm surprised that Sasuke's still waiting around at the valley of the end where the two of them had their battle in the comic. What's he doing there? (Although I can't wait to find out!)
Personally, I loved Naruto's flashback and its parallel with bring back Sasuke home again. Its a beautiful thing and a great moment to bond the two closer. Stories that go into Naruto's head as a child always pull at my heart and this one was no exception. (In fact, it was exceptional!) Fantastic job on the chapter. ^^
Keep up the great work. :D
Personally, I loved Naruto's flashback and its parallel with bring back Sasuke home again. Its a beautiful thing and a great moment to bond the two closer. Stories that go into Naruto's head as a child always pull at my heart and this one was no exception. (In fact, it was exceptional!) Fantastic job on the chapter. ^^
Keep up the great work. :D
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May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*melts* Ahhhh!!! Through this type of writing, you bring art in more ways then one, to my imagination. I still don't know why you criticize yourself so much, your writing is lovely and a joy to read. I can't wait for the next chapter! Not only that, but you left me wondering what Kyuubi said to that little foxling!
-Damp *CAN'T WAIT FOR YOUR NEXT UPDATE!!!*
-Damp *CAN'T WAIT FOR YOUR NEXT UPDATE!!!*
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May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!... hmmm, but now I want to know what Kyuubi said to the little fox to get it to move like that.. XD
Well, waiting desperately for the next update!..^^
Well, waiting desperately for the next update!..^^
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May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
T-T...suspense is KILLING me.
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May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Blood?! You left us hanging like this??? WAAAAAAHHHH!!!!