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for Kyuubi the Bitch

by Lechan

person a kitsunes light
schedule May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOOOOOOOOW I can't believe how quickly you updated!!!! YAAAAAAY update soon please!!!
You got me really curius, and I didn't get exactly how it ended, write soon please!!!
person gryphonwills
schedule May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice!
schedule May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The poor baby! Oh goodness, I read this fic at the right time. I sympathized SO MUCH with Naruto, it's ridiculous. ^^" I'm really glad the next chapter will be focused on him cause I really want to know what's going through his mind right now and how he'll react to what's going to happen. Cosmos, this is such a good fic...very strange, and more than a little mortifying at times...but, very very good. I just couldn't stop reading and I can't wait to read more.
schedule May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter! I'm glad that you are still writing this fic.
=)
schedule May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!! Its been a while since I read this but I love how Sasuke and Naruto's relationship has been slowly developing. Neither of them want to admit to liking each other. And Naruto... poor Naruto!! I think this is the only story on here where Naruto believeably (and justifiably) freaks out and has a breakdown about how his life suck and is unfair and (well, the list certainly does go on, doesn't it?) Although now that Sasuke has given in and decides to go with Orochimaru... how will Naruto take this!!??


You've definitely got a handle of the characters. Keep up the great work!
schedule May 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
it came back :D yay! well i liked this chapter especially what i'm assuming was naruto getting territorial over sakura clinging to his MAN! whoo, then that look he gave her lol damn naruto show her who's the head bitch around here! rofl

though i did love their close 'girl' bonding, it was fun

i'm a bit peeved that stupid itachi showed up when he did with his big ol bucket o angst grrrr and we just had a naruto kissing sasuke's belly followed by them fighting, it could have all come out into the open and they could have begun their relationship but nooooo stupid itachi *pouts*

until next time!
person Jan
schedule May 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I can't believe Sasuke did that... oh wait, I can, but still it sucks that he did!!!

Great writing skills, love the way the story is going!

Can't wait for chapter 5, hope it's soon!

Jan
person hisoka
schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
the bitch comment is always out of line expeciallly when your talking bout a guy with female hormones, none the less if fits.i was hoping to see the annoying fox but guess we wont be hearing from it in a while ne.well hope you can update soon
schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I really love this story. It is so facinating and your writing structure makes it all the more compelling. I can't wait to read more!
person fan
schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
<_> “Are you talking to it?!” im not the only one hehehehhehhhhhhhwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah