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May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
GAHH!! Sasuke you DUMBASS!!! Although I have to admit his reasons for leaving here are much better than in the manga. XD The chapter was so long and had sooo damn many good parts in it that I can't begin to cover them all. It was a great read and I was so happy to see that you had updated again!
I am really impressed that you are able to play the fem side of Naruto without him totally losing his masculinity. It's also very interesting how you are writing Sakura in this. She's in character as she was at that point in the anime/manga and yet she isn't being bashed! Very awesome XD
Looking forward to reading more!!
I am really impressed that you are able to play the fem side of Naruto without him totally losing his masculinity. It's also very interesting how you are writing Sakura in this. She's in character as she was at that point in the anime/manga and yet she isn't being bashed! Very awesome XD
Looking forward to reading more!!
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May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke was beginning to think he needed some form of therapy.
Now THAT! Is an understatement. And what do you mean your writing's not good enough? You're writing is plenty good, above and beyond the norm!
-Damp *I'm glad you felt shamed enough to update though!! Please keep updating!!!*
Now THAT! Is an understatement. And what do you mean your writing's not good enough? You're writing is plenty good, above and beyond the norm!
-Damp *I'm glad you felt shamed enough to update though!! Please keep updating!!!*
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May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY!!! YAAAAAAY I'm sooo happy you finally updated thanks!!!!
It wasn't what I was expecting but it was really good!!!
I can't wait to see what comes next! And I hope sasuke doesn't get to sound this time or at least that he comes back and meets naru years later!
And I'm really curius as to what was in naru's tsukuyomi!!!
Well I will be waiting for the next chapter!
It wasn't what I was expecting but it was really good!!!
I can't wait to see what comes next! And I hope sasuke doesn't get to sound this time or at least that he comes back and meets naru years later!
And I'm really curius as to what was in naru's tsukuyomi!!!
Well I will be waiting for the next chapter!
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May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Frickin awesome!
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May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for updating! It was... epic. I like the whole damn thing, even if Sasuke has flashbacks! Please consider yourself stalked now. ^_^
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May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
it was a really good chapter, I mean, you showed their initial attraction and how confusing and scared it made them.Sorry to see Sasuke turn to Orochimaru, but curious to see how you take this fic now... planning on time jumping it?
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April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OOOOh! This fic is awesome! It's hilarious, yet heart-wrenching at the same time! I love it! I especially love the way you've portrayed Naruto's and Sasuke's characters, it's all so cute!!! I hope you will update soon, as I'd really love to read more of this intriging fic!
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April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow
just
wow
I seriously love this story, babe
it's not your stereotypical MPreg
and I'm enjoying it a lot
I totally can't wait for the next chapter!
the only thing I recomend is to be careful with your coding
because almost the entire third chapter was italicized (sp?)
and the last 1/4 of it was bolded as well
truth be told, it kind of made the reading difficult
read it anyways, though
so
'til next time
ja~
^o^
just
wow
I seriously love this story, babe
it's not your stereotypical MPreg
and I'm enjoying it a lot
I totally can't wait for the next chapter!
the only thing I recomend is to be careful with your coding
because almost the entire third chapter was italicized (sp?)
and the last 1/4 of it was bolded as well
truth be told, it kind of made the reading difficult
read it anyways, though
so
'til next time
ja~
^o^
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March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I will admit it, I read this only after stumbling across your one shots. Normally I'm not for the mpreg fics.. but now I've read this twice and still love it!!! The one liners and situations in this are hilarious!!.. I also wonder if Sasuke will end up doing something about that fox before mating season ends or just wait it out with frustration.. XD
Please update this soon, I'm really looking forward to finding out what happens next, especially after Naruto stayed the night!! Will he borrow clothes for their mission? Will that start any rumors about the two being together? Maybe Sakura will view Naruto as competition for Sasuke afterall? Sooooo many questions and I'm only left hanging until you update this!
Looking forward to the next chapter!!
Please update this soon, I'm really looking forward to finding out what happens next, especially after Naruto stayed the night!! Will he borrow clothes for their mission? Will that start any rumors about the two being together? Maybe Sakura will view Naruto as competition for Sasuke afterall? Sooooo many questions and I'm only left hanging until you update this!
Looking forward to the next chapter!!
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February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please please please update soon!!! I found this story in fanfiction quite sometime ago but lost it and couldn't find it again, and now that I found it here I REALLY want it to continue!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write SOOON!!!!
Im really curiusm, because with all the mpregs I read (wuite some because now Im kinda liking it a lot) I never read one were naruto also had PMS! And it's really funny how he has to pass for all those things, and how he seems to love sasuke but doesn't realize it!
So... I 'll be waiting for the next chap, write soon please!!!
Im really curiusm, because with all the mpregs I read (wuite some because now Im kinda liking it a lot) I never read one were naruto also had PMS! And it's really funny how he has to pass for all those things, and how he seems to love sasuke but doesn't realize it!
So... I 'll be waiting for the next chap, write soon please!!!