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next chap will be up soon? I sure hope it does! please update!!!!!!!!!

Poor Naruto! Bad stuff always happens to him. He has to go through so many hardships because of Kyuubi. Continue please! I want to find out the pairings.

I adore this! Its so well thought... so beautifully crafted! I am so happy to have read it! Thank you very much! It was a real pleasure! ^.^

Great to see more from you on this story, just love it and all the Sasuke/Naruto moments; it's packed full of boy goodness. Wonderful plot and I really like how you've presented it. I hope you stick with this, I'd hate to see this good story not be finished. Take care and keep up the good work.

littleolmee
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I really like this story. Other than the few mistake you made with the timeline (the one with the sound attacking) you're doing a great job. But chapter three's format is a bit messed up. Half of it is in italic font and most of the end is in bold font. I fixed it myself to make it easier to read. I could send it to you if you'd like so you can replace it. E-mail me at DuosAngel02@yahoo.com if you want it.

Can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon!

Hey, how was boot camp (laughs vindictively). Seriously though I want to thank you for risking your life (and going through bootcamp) to defend this country and what it stands for. (bows to you). To defend our rights, including the right to read and write whatever we want. Like yaoi hentai

Anyway this is a great story. It has the right amount of humour, drama, and action. Well, it needs a little more action, but I'm sure there's more to come. I'm impressed by your talent to write and keep true to eveyone's character. It's nice to see Kyuubi be mean. There are too many stories where it is nice and sweet. I also love the stalker fox. Although, I've never heard that particular mating ritual. And I have to ask, how the hell did a little fox drag Naruto from his camp to a cave? Antway, good story and keep up the good work soldier.

(PS I've thought about joining the service but I have way to many back problems. Been in to many bike and horseback riding accidents.

awwww i wanna see the relationship grow more!!! update again soon!!!!!

YOUD THINK HE JUST GO ON A KILLING SPREE AFTER ALL THIS CRAP HAPPENED TO HIM BUT HES LEARNING TO EXCEPT IT, CRAZY BEING PISSED ON BY A FOX AND CHASED BY ONE NOONE SHOULD EVER HALF TO GET USE TO.HOPE YOU UPDATE THIS SOON IM CURIOUS TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT AND LATER, GOOD LUCK AND PROPS TO YOU FOR A FANTASTIC STORY

I LOOOOOOOOOOOVE the fact that this chapter are so freakin' LOOOONG!!!!

I LOVE that!!! There are quite a few authors that also have VERY long chapter, but their so few. It's disappointing. . . .

NEVER THE LESS!!!! I love this fic and I can't wait to see how Sasuke manages to get Naruto pregnant after Naruto specifically said he would never someone shove their dick's up his- - - (Tsunade screaming in the background, "THAT'S ENOUGH!!!")

-Damp *UP HIS ASS!!((get's attacked by Tsunade))*

Hey!

I love your story... but it's not finished!!! When are you going to continue it!!!!