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August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like your story. A few spelling problems here and there but that' easily looked over. :)
Can't wait for the next chappy.
Can't wait for the next chappy.
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August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You're going off to boot camp? >.< means no update for a while. Anyway, I really love your story. Be sure to update once you're back!! Ja!
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August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I swear I just laughed my ass off when I read “you’re period started.”
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August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
cute f sakura or anyone saw that theyd ak questions,i like how sasuke goes against the red fox thats practically infatuated with naruto who wouldnt kick that stalking thing.kiba was beaten up wanna see his face when he sees naruto and sasuke being civil watch him pale when sasuke gives him that glare of his that will melt your brain into mush and explode your head.
keep it up hope you can update soon first time reader but already lovin it
luck 2 U
keep it up hope you can update soon first time reader but already lovin it
luck 2 U
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August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's so cute and so funny... the ending of the chapter had me grinning with Sasuke being so generous. And I nearly died laughing when that fox humped... then started stalking Naruto... I thought it was going to be fox vs. Sasuke at one point... so much so that I laughed when I heard about how Sasuke was thinking about punting the poor thing before deciding to run away with Naruto instead. Aww poor Naruto is PMSing... somehow I can see that easily happening with him. I love your story and I hope you get many reviews for your wonderful writing.
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August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved the long chapter and glad you could get this out before you left! I love how you've wrote their friendship and I think you kept them in character very well. I'm glad this chapter was mostly focused on the two of them and in Sasuke's pov. :)
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August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this story is brilliant. i look foward to reading more when you come back. have fun!
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August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like the way this story is going. It's going to be hard to wait two months for the next chapter. Good luck!
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August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great new chapter! I really cant wait to see what happens next.
I know whatever comes next will be even better and worth the wait.
Good luck with boot camp...hope all goes well for you :D
I know whatever comes next will be even better and worth the wait.
Good luck with boot camp...hope all goes well for you :D
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August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Look forward to when you get your laptop back! Very good story! I liked seeing Sasuke's PoV this chapter. There were a few places where the words were either missing the first letter or it was an incorrect letter, so you might want to look over it one more time to try to find them. It is hard to reread your own work sometimes since you know what is there and your mind has a tendency to fill in the blanks, lol.
Awesome job, can't wait to read more when you get back!
Awesome job, can't wait to read more when you get back!