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August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You've made me cry more times than I care to think about reading this story. I'm almost as emotionally unstable as Naruto in this fic. :D
Can't wait ot see more.
Kimra
Can't wait ot see more.
Kimra
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August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. I think that it is really going somewhere and I like how you are building up the relationship. nice work.
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August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
One of the better stories I've read and undoubtably one of the most respectable yaois. You've not degraded Naruto and Sasuke into Fangirl fandom, they jab, curse, insult, jump, battle, and draw blood. They haven't lost their indentities just so you can play fangirl matchmaker and have Naruto go submissive and start popping out man-babies. You've kept their draw intact and so far their bonding hasn't gone beyond what one could see developing copasetically. Hope you get back on the keyboard and put out the next chapter soon.
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August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey yo! i printed off this story and took it with me when i went to the country last week, it gave me good times to alleviate the boredom :D hella funny stuff man, poor poor naruto
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July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, just want to say that your story is one of the absolute best I've read. I couldn't stop laughing at the first chapter, and I love the cliffhanger for chapter 2. I can't wait for updates, looking extremely forward to the next chapter! Thanks!^_^
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July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I already wrote to u and send it on your email I just adding to your reviews I hope that you up date soon read your story then
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July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke a sweetie. Lol. This story is the best! I seriously wait eagerly await each chapter and think this is one of the best stories out there. Very clever and humorous.
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July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
One thing to say about this story: W0W o.o
I love it!!!!!!!!!!
I love it!!!!!!!!!!
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July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
First time i'm reading this story and i am throughly impressed. You tell a great story and te wording as well as the interaction between Sasuke and Naruto is superb. I don't think they were too OOC. If you really think about it, if Sasuke does anything other than give blank stares, smirk, or be angry then it'll always be OOC. No need for worry. That little moment there where their foreheads almost touched was truly kawaii. I can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon. :)
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July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a very well written chapter. And I really like how you ended it. Great job!