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I like it. Especially the humor at the beginning and the Uzamaki PMS. Please continue.

This is very interesting, I can't wait to see where you take this.

I love this chapter it was so funny. I can't wait for the rest.

OMG i loved this. XD please update soon nya. XD thats great, i loved sasuke's expression. nyahahaha

This is really good and I hope you continue it! :)

Well, you got my attention, for sure! This is fantastic so far. It's like...it's like you've taken some of the cliches of the fandom and started writing about them in a way that's not cliche. This is definitely a very different way to look at Mpreg. I don't think a lot of the authors really take into account how emotionally and mentally scarring it would be for Naruto to suddenly have woman bits. This rings true so far, and I think that's why I really like it. Plus, I love how the first chapter explains the title. At first, when I saw it on the main page, I thought it was a bit melodramatic, but by the end of the chapter, I thought it was perfect. Love it, Love it, Love it. I really, really hope you keep on going with this. The dynamics you've established are believable, captivating, and full of awesome. I will definitely read the second chapter (and any other chapters after that).

wow, this was a great first chapter. I made the mistake of smoking a cigarette while reading this and damn near choked on the inhale, not once or even twice but three times! Congrats, you've become the third author that has managed to do that to me. ne ways, thanxs and hope to see more from u soon.

damn really wow dat was good. i luv it n i hope
u update soon. best of luck AoiKitsune =^-^= o
if der is neway u can send me an email or some
-thing soo i can no u updated. plz n thnxs ja ne

I loved this story. It's quite ingenious to tell you the truth. Anyway, enough of this prattle. I hope you add another chapter soon. Ja.

this story is sooo good!!! please put chapter 2 up soon!!!!!