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for Kyuubi the Bitch

by Lechan

schedule October 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story i cannot wait to see the next update
schedule October 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Congratulations on getting your wings! I'm so happy for you! Thanks so much for updating; I've been checking it everyday lol. But now you have to update again! I NEED to know what happens!
It was really sweet hearing about how Suigetsu and Juugo felt for Sasuke (Not so much with Karin...freaky bitch lol). There was a lot of characterisation in there that I didn't expect; they feel more real to me now, not just a named character from the series but characters in their own right. Wow, way to go!
Also, Sasuke's becoming more like Naruto? That is just...wow brilliant. It's true that Naruto tends to change the heart of everyone he comes into contact with so why should the same not be true for Sasuke when he loves the dobe? He's even willing to let other's help him with his revenge as that's no longer all that it's about. Now it's a mission to save the one he loves and he no longer has the selfish illusion that he can do it all by himself...at least that's the impression I got. I may be completely wrong lol.
Thanks so much and I hope you update as soon as you can.
SasuNaru Fangirl20 xXxXxXx
person meowkuu2
schedule October 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
its like... OMG FREAKIN GOD!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS AWESOME!!!!! please please please update soon as you get enough time!!
person cocopower1
schedule October 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Naruto has an epiphany and gets kidnapped (adult-napped?) by Itachi. Gah! You're killing me. So much drama in one chapter. I can't wait for the next.
person meowkuu2
schedule October 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!! you updated and leave it at a cliff hanger!!??????????? *frustration* nooooooooooooooooo where's sasuske???? *waves hands around frantically* ..u are evil...good...but evil
person hisoka
schedule October 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow what a life altering thing,can only worry about naruto now since hes prego and theres noone to help him right now.though i dont think itachis going to kill hims since he seems apt to seeing his neice or nephew or maybe im reading way too much into it.sasukes gatta hurry~wonder how long it will take them to notice that naruto is missing...hmm cant wait to see what happens next especially since the next chaper seems to be almost done.unless that was a lie to get out of the angry beatings
...jk
schedule October 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAHHHHHHHHH! I can't believe you left it like that! I am not going to be able to sleep properly until I find out what happens!
Seriously though, that was an epic chapter. I should inform you that you are still firmly in 1st place as my favourite author of all time!
It was incredibly well written and as much in character as it could be for these well known characters in such an odd situation from the norm. The way Naruto reacted to discovering his true feelings for Sasuke was perfect; exactly as I would have imagined it, only written far better than I could ever manage lol! And then, straight after he has come to term with his feelings, Itachi turns up! This is soooo not good. I'm so glad that the next chapter is 90% done as I guess that means you'll be updating soon yes? PLEASE!!!! I want Sasuke and Naruto to be able to meet and tell each other their true feelings before having more yummy smex!!! lol.
Anyway, thanks for the chapter and congratulations for getting through such a difficult few weeks! Give it your best!
SasuNaru Fangirl20 xXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXx
schedule October 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE!!! I swear I am not above begging... ok I'm begging! Please..............*sob*. If you stop now, I will go into a depression so deep....I can't finish that. But seriously, I love this story! Please continue! I HAVE to find out what happens!!!!

Eagerly awaiting the next update with baited breath,
SasuNaru Fangirl20
xxxxxx
person cynaga
schedule October 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow wow wow!
schedule October 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see that chapter 19 found its correct home. I really enjoyed the parts where Naruto begins to accept that he may be in love with Sasuke.