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Okay, so this has become the Naruto fic I check on everyday- no exaggeration. Occasionally a few times a day, depending on my workload. Besides MPreg being my guilty pleasure, I love your characterization in what's usually a cliche, unnecessarily sappy convention. Awesome work!

Gah! I love this story so much!!!

dang man it took him almost two chapters to figure out itachi was screwing with him, you better hurry your butt back to konoha before its too late sasu-kun or you will e royally fucked D:

can't wait for the next chapter and just a side note deidara is one crazy psychotic mutherfreaking lunatic but cool too lol

I love what you are doing with the story and I for one don't care that you won't follow canon-I would rather you be able to write without constraints.

Kyuubi as an ancient more complex summons is an interesting idea. I never thought to question why Kyuubi would be paralyzed by a garden variety fox, but this fact was a great twist.

I'm also happy that you consistently have Sakura rise to be a better person. I realized in this chapter that this was one of the few times I've seen Naruto and Sasuke paired up where the author didn't feel the need to bash or derail Sakura's character and hard earned growth.

I enjoyed Naruto's Uchiha rants and Kyuubi's attempts at trying to warn Naruto of Madara. Neji was written well and you could see the subtle ways he grew into a better man who shows a new lease on life from where Naruto saved him from his destiny trap and I enjoyed his characterization-you did a better job of showcasing this than the anime did in the timeskip.I look forward to pregnant Naruto.

wow,sasuke has alot of flashbacks and theyre really detailed too.lol love the play doh kick and the other ones too thought i cant remember what they were at the moment.wooh...seems naruto and sasuke will be seeing each other again soon if that powers what i think it is.well cant wait to see what happens next

Its good that you continue. It would be interesting, if Naruto gets pregnant and what we know now from the last Chapters of the original manga, when he gives birth, (Spoiler!!)must there be someone there to hold the seal down and prevent Kyuubi from breaking out? Will you bring this fact in your Fic later in, that the seal is most weakly at the childbirth? Maybe Kyuubi planned all this.

glad to see you're back and with an awesome chapter no less. poor sasuke, his brother is always picking on him and chibi sasuke i just want to hold and protect him. he should have stayed with his light but his reasoning for leaving is sound even if it is kinda stupid, he should have waited >.>but anyway can't wait for the next chapter knowing it's naru's turn and wanting to know how he's coping now that his sasuke is gone. :D
welcome back and hurry with the next chapter :3

Yay new chapter!!!!! i'm so glad you're still writing this!! i was strating to get a little worried lol i love what your doing though!! sasuke's chakra around the kyubi and the kyubi not wanting to kill Naruto? amazing i can't wait to see what else you do with this! i love how you're following the manga/anime implicitly but at the same time weaving your own thoughts and story into it by just changing very minor things and letting us see their thoughts! and since i'm caught up on the manga i assume you're going to use his mother's situation to warn him of when Midara will attack? then you'll have to have sasuke sneak back and help right? Goddess above i can't wait for more!!

I really cracked up at the whole fox kidnapping Naruto bit. It was like the worst things got for Naruto the harder I laughed at him (you mean it peed on me had me rolling). I really enjoy the comedy here.

I was kind of surprised to see you had updated after more than a month of not updating... hmm. Anyway... this brings more troubled thoughts, are you sticking to the anime canon in this sense? or are you choosing another path? By the way... you have to do something about Naruto!!