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I forgot about this and then i remembered after reading the summary. i loved the smut, it was sensual and slow and just right! I do feel that things are going to turn out for good.and that naruto is pregant :D

hot...wow to think they did it so many times all night infact im surprised sasuke could even get up but i guess that also a bit more of his determination he just wants to breeze through his battle with itachi to get back to naruto and maybe his baby(if all that enjoyable work actually got him pregnant at all that is).well narutos gonna be pissed when he wakes up, maybe he did hear sasukes decloration of love at least one of those times...or not who knows.all i can say is im ready to hear the rantings of an angry and sore naruto. hope you can update soon cant wait to see what happens

Well. I haven't looked at this story in probably literally years, and I was quite pleased to find it is a lot longer than the last time I read. I'm particularly impressed with the 'first time' sex thus far. Sometimes it's written far too... coordinated. This has an extra element of 'real'.

I'm enjoying the way you've written this fic such that it fits well with the canon whilst adding a vastly different twist. I look forward to the next chapter.

Keep up the good work!

~Angel

dude!!!!

seriously, need the sex fix badly!!!!!

yummy boys! ~_^

miko

WOW! ^_^ great story! It took me a few days to get through this, what with still needing to maintain a life as well as that fact some of these chapters are almost obscenely (in a perfectly good, don't change them) way. But I enjoyed every moment, and trust me, I have laughed and 'squeed' several times over this so far, I can't wait to see how the rest turns out. If you do update notifications will you add me too the list? Emeraldfairy18@ hotmail.com

hehe, wasnt that an ova or something?? a special little showing or something??? Poor thing all he wanted to do was go to the bathroom but they were all occupodo or out of his reach by nefarious ways I say lol, and then to have that lazy no good Sasu Chan shove the baton up his poor aching bum??? I felt for my poor Naru I really did....and omg why cant Sasu come out and say he loves Naru wouldnt that be easier for Naru to hold onto in case Sasu dont come back??? and whats gonna happen next?? if your vaguely following the timeline then when he does fight itachi and finds out it was the village elders but aand wasnt his revenge but what about his children??? because I am hoping they are twins, a boy and girl or two girls or two boys.....eithr way twins would be good me thinks lol, anyhow sooooooooooo loving this sstory cant wait for more and sorry for the sucky typing am sooooooooo tired, so late here and I need sleep, ty ty ty for the exceellent read, huuggles and smiles Mija..:-)

Wow @_@ not what i expected at all...first thing that comes to mind. Self lubricating? lol i never thought 'it' would act like a v-jay at all..
second. u blushing sasuke is so irresistible, and thank god naruto is not such of a dobe to be immune to his feelings :D I was glad when i say this had an update *bounces happily* Now i don't want Sasuke to leave!He just came back.

I love the fact that he showed up before leaving to go to kill Itachi. I hope that he slips out that he loves naruto, either as he comes or if he sticks around a little bit as naruto falls alseep and whispers it to him, but actually narutos not sleeping and hears it.*squeals* anywhoo can't wait for the next chapter, hope to read it soon!

Sasuke better not just be gone when Naruto wakes up in the morning. I'll kill him myself if he does. I will!!! O_O

This was a good chapter. I know you don't like it, but you did a good job. I love Naruto's little panics at the thought and want of intimacy. Its something he's longed for and wanted for so long and now that Sasuke's offering it (for however briefly), Naruto is too afraid to accept it.

Keep up the great work.

Chapter 13 was great. Wonderful to see Naruto and Sasuke being intimate but staying in character.