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I absolutely LOVE this story, you are an excellent writer! I think it's great that Naruto and Sasuke don't get all sappy and overly romantic during thier first time. It was very believable and very well-written. I can't wait to read the next chapter and the chapters after that!

Keep up the AWESOME work!!! :)

indeed that was the wrong thing to say.well this is...a pickle...only thing that came to mind sorry but really things are gonna be weird for the both of them.and sasuke still want to leave after his brother very soon too wonder if this problems gonna be solved with a fight too before sasuke leaves. eather way karins gonna either make things worse or better when she comes into the picture.cant wait for updates

"I need you to bear my children." Bwahahahahaha!!! Sasuke, you fool! You need to ease into a conversation like that. ROTFLMAO!!! =^^=


Keep up the great work!

NEW READER HERE!! i couldn't tear myself away from this story. I have to do laundry and time is slipping by and i just HAD to finish these 12 chapters! lol...I can't believe naruto is still in denial, yet sasuke could have said it better, instead of making it sound like naruto was just his housewife or something. Plus he has to leave Again ?! how much is he going to put Naruto through? *is frustrated*

This story is so great and im excited to see what comes next, so don't doubt yourself. I know it can be a bit tiring to write and wonder what comes next, but we the diligent readers are here to spur you on ! don't forget that we'll always keep coming back :D

gosh you'reso hard on yourself, I thought the chapter was great. This is one of my favorite stories so I'm happy with any updates. I can't wait for sasuke and naruto's fuzzy suitor to collide yet again.

i laughed my ass off at the ending!!!

oh please keep going! i wanna see the ending! or rather the rest of this that is in that BEAUTIFUL head of yours!!!!

miko ~_^

wow things get more intense as it goes on.sais too close to the truth hope he doesnt know, so sasukes finally coming back from his mission and narutos pissed somenes gonna be sleeping on the couch for a while. good thing sasuke has the other head band so he has proof that he didnt go back on his promise though i doubt thatll stem narutos anger at him. well the little kitsunes gonna get his rival back and sasukes gonna start his wooing of naruto soon too cant wait. hope you can update soon love the length

Excellent chapter!!!1

it may have sucked to write but I love it! Sasuke is coming back in the next chapter right??? please tell me he is coming back i want to see what happens. looking forward to the next chapter.

Great chapter! Looking forward to the next one.