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September 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I dont know how the hell I didn't notice this second chapter before but.. DAMN.
As hawt as that was, its almost as if Jiraiya stole BOTH chapters for being the manipulative super pervert that he is.
Jiraiya you sly LITTLE devil!
As hawt as that was, its almost as if Jiraiya stole BOTH chapters for being the manipulative super pervert that he is.
Jiraiya you sly LITTLE devil!
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May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great story man though its sad u not updated it in a long time its been stuck at 2 chapters for ages any plans on still taking it further ?
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April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You got my heart thumping so hard it’s about to burst out of my chest… good thing people don’t actually get nosebleeds from lust, or I may have bled out long ago! I love this story; I've read it several times. Lady Tsunade is the only female character I actually like enough to read about. As for the 2nd chapter I’m not terribly fond of Sakura but Tsunade being a secondary character in the ‘assault on Naruto’ made it very amusing. Thanks for a great story!
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March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hee hee. Although you can't help but note that some fifteen year old just busted a nut in a fifty year old woman.
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February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! I normally don't like Sakura... she's my least favorite character, but in this piece... interesting. I liked it!
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February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh yeah! That was hot! I like the pairing!
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January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. You have a well-thought out plot with a healthy amount of sex. Can't wait to see the next chapter. Update again soon!!
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December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
man i just reread this story again and its awsome! i just hope that you havent abandoned this story. please update soon. its too good of a story to leave unfinished. also, is tsunade gonna teach shizune how to be a legendary sucker too?
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September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story, really. Well writtain, spaced well and good mood for it. I agree to, theres dozens of other ideas you've set yourself up to play with, such as Shizune like you mentioned, or maybe Anko and so forth. It's a great opening, and a lot of potential. I cant wait to see what happens if you continue this, hopefully. Take care.
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August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
never mind i found more errors when i looked... but overall its sill well written and has few errors considering that you have no beta